This is awesome. Hmmm.... commentary. You say the "cocain whore" thing a bit much. We get teh jist of it, you don't need to repeat those words all the time. Besides that uberly awesome. :)
Mindfreak is right. Coke is a LOT stronger than X but since you have already written it that way we will just go along. I am loving this story. Poor little Frankie. Can't wait to read more.
Wow. This is painful to read - but in a good way if you know what I mean. It hurts to know that they are in a relationship like that. I am very curious to see how this progresses.