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  • avenging angel

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    Idk why but I can't wait til her date on Friday!!!!!
    August 20th, 2010 at 04:55pm
  • thewickedendax7

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    'Nothing Compares 2 U'
    Sinead O'Connor (1990) sad
    Olivia Newton-John and John Travolta
    "You're the One That I Want" (1978) happy
    August 20th, 2010 at 02:23pm
  • RachelRose523

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    Love this!!!!!

    Here's a couple of songs that I came up with:
    Naturally or Round and Round - both by Selena Gomez
    Stay or When I Look At You - both by Miley Cyrus
    Six Feet Under the Stars by All Time Low
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:19am
  • avenging angel

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    Hope you write more soon!!!!this story is cute!!!!!
    August 19th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • avenging angel

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    Hope you write more soon!!!!this story is cute!!!!!
    August 19th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    oooh, things are getting complicated now :O Loved the update and the part in Adrian's P.O.V
    :) xx
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:39pm
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    ooooh drama!

    Love it Update soon
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:24pm
  • carly13666

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    hmmm interesting
    i really want to know what happens now
    August 18th, 2010 at 09:04am
  • LiveFreeDieWell

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    lol and he's not a man whore?? He's just a bit blind to the fact he's a slut too ;)
    August 18th, 2010 at 07:54am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    August 18th, 2010 at 06:31am
  • popsicle?

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    I like it! update soon, sorry no suggestions or remarks past that today.
    August 18th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Ohhhh boy
    August 18th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • who.could.guess

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    *GASP*
    I love it.(:
    August 18th, 2010 at 04:51am
  • fictionsymphony

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    WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
    Something is about to go down.
    Something bad.
    That stupid girl just had to say something about Paul
    that now isn't true.
    Ugh. I want more.
    August 18th, 2010 at 03:47am
  • TogetherWeStand

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    alright i just have to say this. this story is soo awesome
    August 9th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • xxblackxx

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    Owh and anyway.. i forgot to add...Lynn should answer the phone call...
    and maybe say no to a date and everything and when Adrian say...
    hang out as friends? or for the old days...
    Then lynn be like all okay yeah maybe...
    since well I think Lynn's too nice to say no to friends... Right??
    and Paul'll be the Paul he is and be all I'll beat the crap out of him but Lynn should not know that he's jealous...
    and then Lynn found out he's jealous..
    kind of thing... =D
    That's what I was thinking anyway..
    but I'm sure your idea are better since it always is.. =D
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:25pm
  • xxblackxx

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    That was freaking hilarious.. =D
    It was funny how Kim's dad saw Paul and how busted Paul was....
    and I can just imagine how cute Paul was eating breakfast...
    Twitter is like a block... You telling people what's on your mind or what you did...
    but springform are questions people send to you to know more about you....
    I don't know whether you should make one...
    Coz I don't have one...
    I don't really know if it's fun or not.... =D
    Anyway... Update soon!
    Love ya and ya story.. ^-^
    August 5th, 2010 at 02:22pm
  • CrazyCall

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    Okay well a Journal is like a diary where you can write what your thinking and feeling but you can let people read it so its like not a private. As to the twitter or Spring whatever up to you. And Lynn should answer the call and then be like I would love to go on a date with you but I have a bf sorry. And then Adrian should be all like okay and then be like well i will try anyway and then try to get her but she is all like no. And then Paul should be like I will beat this guy up and then scare Adrien away.
    August 5th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • fictionsymphony

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    No!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Not that I don't like Adrian at all it's just that I want Lynn and Paul to be okay right now.
    I have no clue what you're gonna do here but this is definitely going to change things.
    You seriously surprised me with this update, I didn't see it coming. :)

    As for your questions in the AN, a journal is a space where you can write about your day, it can be physical journal (notebook) or a public one like livejournal.com. & I have a twitter I love, the difference between it and formspring is that on formspring all you do is answer questions and it gets boring after awhile, but with twitter it's always fun. I would recommend you get a twitter.
    August 4th, 2010 at 07:44pm
  • octoberlover_1014

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    its doesnt look like your stuck now...write about that adrian dude.. then make paul over hear and make him get all mad and stuff. but then she tells him she cant. then blah blah blah.....update soon!
    August 4th, 2010 at 06:40pm