Kiss Me - Comments

Awwh (:
I loved the chapter! (: It was so cute! Okay..Lynn should stick to Paul. I mean she's never going to find a man like Paul, or better than him for that matter, so she should definitely stick to Paul!
More, please?
P.S.
A journal is just like a insite to what is going on. Like you could write anything there && people can comment on it.
Twitter you tell what you're doing and you can post like pictures&& videos while spring form random people ask you questions on there && you answer them (:
I think.. haha.

i really like this story, she has to stay with paul.

twitter is more like facebook where you update you status with things your doing or that are on your find, except instead of adding people as friends you just follow their profile and you can follow bands, actresses etc.

formspring is where people ask you questions and you answer them

i have both and i rarely use my formspring account and sometimes use twitter.

A journal is similar to a diary.

Love the update......as usual

aww pauly is blushing!!!!!!!!!!!!

she gotts to stay with Paul! Paul is awesome and sexy! Plus he has a six pack! Ha ha anyways, twitter and spring(whatever can't remember the name...) on twitter u can post whatever and spring( whatever the rest of the name is) is just a question thing people can ask u.

Oh.. and, more soon? :P

Awww! =) SUch a cute chapter; Lynn needs to stop doubting Paul so much and open up a bit :P I mean, he's so effin' adorable! xD
I loved this chapter =) And the whole situation with Kim's parents was hilarious!
As for Adrian... well, he's a nice guy; Maybe Lynn should just tell him everything and how she's not available anymore =) I'm sure he'd understand.

Oh, and thank you for the story mention in your authors note! =) <3

I feel like even if Lynn doesn't go out with adrian she should at least tell him in person...although I like when Paul gets worked up, I think she should go for it

idk about springform but twitter is an excellent way for your friends to stalk you, not against it, that's just what it seems like to me

Ok first hey and I loved the update. I think Lynn should be smart and tel Adrian that somethings just aren't made to be and that there is someone out there for him.

Second: I don't know what a springform or springfrom whatever it is, but I do know twitter and I have one but I'm never on it. As for a Journal, it's kind of like a diary, but more something you would be most likely to share with others.

More soon girly.

loved the update

write more

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

Awwwwww, That Was So Romantic lol

great update

AMAZING!!!!!! Ah I wish that could have been how my first kiss could have gone. That's okay though life will go on. And that guy is gone. So now I cant help but what will happen in the future. I feel as though two fights will happen. Maybe you will just have to make another book or one really long one. we will have to see.

What if like she ends up hunging out with Aiden, and Paul finds out and freaks or something. And they have a big blow out.

Oh my god, that was by far the best chapter! (:
It was so cute how he was so excited to see Lynn that he woke up at 5 in the morning!
Imprints are adorable, I like that better than Singers, which is just creepy; "your blood sings for me"
"your my gravity" <- now thats cuter! xD

I love the whole chapter!
And when he first saw her in the morning, when girls think their at their worst.
AWE, HE SEEN HER AT HER WORST!

Okay..i'll stop now. xD

Well that was nice and sweet... =D
Does Adrian ring a bell??
Yes he rings a bell to me...
More like a car horn or a carnival horn..
Whichever is louder...
Paul's so funny when he woke up at five..
I could practically imagine him standing on the porch... =D
Anyway.. Update soon! =D
it was awesome as usual....
and I like the song very much..
Miranda Cosgrove is gorgeous.. =D

Awwwwwwwe kissing under the sunrise. For me it'd have to be sunset cause I cannot wake up early to save my butt. lol. Super sweet update! :D

I do think Lynn still should called back Aiden. He sounded so nice I feel kinda bad for the guy.

awe! its so sweet! your a great writer!