Hm... I like this. I didn't read the original, but I just stumbled across your profile and noticed you were just starting, or now that I know, restarting this, so I decided to check it out. I love the idea you have for it; it's very original. :) And I really can't wait for more! :D Definitely... subscribed! :D
Ana :D I'm glad you posted this, I've just got my internet back and this was updated, I was over the moon! I like everyone's reactions to Shy, they're so funny! I think it's really cute about Seth & Shy's little chinese/movie routine haha, shame that Ryan was there though. I really love this story! Update soon <3
Mhm, i really wanted to read this when you were writing it before, but it aleady had quite a lot of chapters, honestly, i really couldn't be bothered to read them all! But I am sooooo glad you are re-writing it, because I can read from the start and keep up to date with it now :) I really loved the first chapter, Ryan seems like a dick. I'm glad Shy turned her life around, it seems so much better now, than how she described her old one. Maybe being away for a while did her some good. I'm really super duper excited about where you're gonna take this and i cannot wait for more <3
Writers of half the stories I was subscribed to started their story over again, just like you did. It's getting annoying. But more detail is good. I like this story a lot anyways so I won't unsubscribe like I did to the others. :/
I loved it every part of it. Every single flipping part.
And I love the chapter names and how they continue as a song.
And the layout.
And the idea.
And the words.
And everything.
This one small mistake I noticed right off the bat... He was the reason she went to live with her Dad in the first place. He was her older brother’s bestfriend, Separate best friend, haha. It was probably just a typo.
No wonder this has almost a million subs on it! It's brilliant (: And I love the layout <3 Chapter 1: I love how cute this chapter is. Shy seems like such a cool character. Ryan seems like an ass, though, and Seth is such a cutie :3 Nice beginning! <3 Chapter 2: LOL! Wal-mart! I love how simple this is, even if her parents buy her everything she wants, haha! And yes, I'll be using a ton of I loves in this comment because I truly love everything about this <3 This chapter was too adorable. Hopefully he calls her back! Chapter 3:He obviously was not expecting the ‘hott babe’ to be the same girl he always tormented. I think I already mentioned that he sounds like an ass. And that takes the cake xD I love how it seems like Shy is actually talking to us, rather than telling us what she's doing. I love it (: Chapter 4:It was up towards Wal-Mart, right next to JC Penny and Subway. But, but, but Phoenix has a great mall! GAH! JCPenny sucks >| Snob moment, sorry, bahaha! And aww! The part at the salon made me smile :D So cute! Chapter 5: Ryan. Oy. Can't he gtfo? :| Chapter 6: Bahaha! She went on the trampoline at three in the morning?! I'm so doing that xD Chapter 7: Oooh, I am wondering what Shy is hiding ;D Can't wait to find out!
Gah, unfortunately, I'm pressed on time so I have to stop this suck-ish comment here D: I'll definitely read more when I can! As you can tell, I'm in love with this :] It's too adorable <3 I'm subbing~