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  • DuckieGirl

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    i love it so far!! i cant wait to read the next chapter!!! :D
    July 3rd, 2010 at 10:02am
  • mistery gurl

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    okay so she lost weight by skipping meals and ended up in hospital becuz of it? im starting to understand her more now :)
    July 3rd, 2010 at 07:42am
  • xoxomusic363

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    I knew it. I just knew that she had had an eating disorder of somekind. Watch her skipping some meals play into the story later ;) love this :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    July 2nd, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    Just like I said about your other story, I think you did a really great job in choosing names with this one too.
    Shy.
    It's like, well, she's been the bullied, intimidated girl that has lost her confidence in herself. Maybe even the "shy" girl.
    But now, she's gained all her confidence back, meaning she's not shy at all anymore, but when she meets Ryan again, she has to face that she hasn't changed that much really and that, even though he was the cause of her suffering, he could also be the one that lets her feel love.
    ....you know...
    haha
    July 2nd, 2010 at 04:24pm
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    I really didn't expect that her past was THAT drastic. But once again, this is one more interesting fact that makes me want to read more and more.
    Your story just flows perfectly, you know. Not too fast and not too slow either. When I read it, I feel...content.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 02:58pm
  • lil_angel666

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    Not eating has long term effects that's why she doesn't feeling things yet

    well if that's wrong then what ever

    got more???
    July 2nd, 2010 at 11:43am
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    This story is amazing. Really, everything about it is. The way you write, the plot, the characters.
    When I read this story, I'm always smiling. I love how you describe Shy's feelings, her situation, her old life and her life now. It's interesting to read what'll happen because, I can assure you, it always turns out to be more than I've anticipated and I'm looking forward to more.
    July 1st, 2010 at 05:43pm
  • DigitalLights

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    I liked tht chap. Please continue writing.
    Please update sooon!!!!

    =)
    July 1st, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • jessi_sunshine

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    This is really good. I can't wait until you write more! :) I love it.
    July 1st, 2010 at 01:28pm
  • jessi_sunshine

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    Wow. This is really good. I love it! :) You're an awesome writer.
    July 1st, 2010 at 12:35pm
  • mistery gurl

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    i agree with xoxomusic363, i cant wait for more!
    July 1st, 2010 at 12:16pm
  • lil_angel666

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    Oh no she slowly forgiving him it's the end of the world!

    *note the sarcasm*

    she just needs to breathe and say i hate you Ryan
    if she wants to convince him she actually does still hte him
    and if not, well IDK kiss him???

    well whatever more???
    July 1st, 2010 at 12:13pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Everytime you update this I'm kinda bummed when I remember that there's not another chapter afterwards :) Love this :) :):):D:D:D:P:P:P
    July 1st, 2010 at 07:57am
  • xoxomusic363

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    LOve it. Love it, love it, love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D:P :P:P
    June 29th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • mistery gurl

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    haha i love it!
    June 29th, 2010 at 07:38am
  • REI REI

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    I just read ur story and it's really good.
    Can't wait for more.
    update!!!!!
    ^_^
    June 29th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • DigitalLights

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    I hope there wont be any blow ups but if there is then i hope its not infront of cute little Julie.

    Pls update!!!
    June 28th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • lil_angel666

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    why does Shy assume that the two days will be horrible

    anyway update???
    June 28th, 2010 at 11:50am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Hahaa that made me chuckle :) I love this ; ):):):D:D:D:P:P:P
    June 23rd, 2010 at 08:05am
  • lil_angel666

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    This story mad emy day
    it's totally funny!

    more must read more please write more!!!!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 02:28pm