So I just stumbled across this and decided to check it out; I think it's an awesome story, and I'm bummed you never continued it. :/ Other than a few things being off with grammar, I thought this was greatly written. It's been a long time since you last updated, so it's probably a bit pointless asking you to update again... not sure you even get on here anymore. But I just thought I would leave a comment letting you know people like me still stumble across your story and enjoy it. :) Perhaps you'll be inspired to continue this one day, there's always the possibility. I really hope you do at least consider it, because I would love to see how Alex and Chloe's story concludes/continues. You could probably even just write a short wrap-up to it or something. But, with what you had of it, great job! Really enjoyed it. :)
Hmm, I thought I'd commented on this when I first read a chapter; apparently not. Anyway, I felt so sorry for Alex when Chloe said they were best friends because he obviously wants more, but then she kissed him and I was like 'YES! <3' I hope Alex isn't just playing her to get further than Gabe, but he seems to really like her. I can't wait to read more and I think you're doing a pretty good job with this :)
Other than a few things being off with grammar, I thought this was greatly written. It's been a long time since you last updated, so it's probably a bit pointless asking you to update again... not sure you even get on here anymore. But I just thought I would leave a comment letting you know people like me still stumble across your story and enjoy it. :)
Perhaps you'll be inspired to continue this one day, there's always the possibility. I really hope you do at least consider it, because I would love to see how Alex and Chloe's story concludes/continues. You could probably even just write a short wrap-up to it or something.
But, with what you had of it, great job! Really enjoyed it. :)