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  • Nanook

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    So I just stumbled across this and decided to check it out; I think it's an awesome story, and I'm bummed you never continued it. :/
    Other than a few things being off with grammar, I thought this was greatly written. It's been a long time since you last updated, so it's probably a bit pointless asking you to update again... not sure you even get on here anymore. But I just thought I would leave a comment letting you know people like me still stumble across your story and enjoy it. :)
    Perhaps you'll be inspired to continue this one day, there's always the possibility. I really hope you do at least consider it, because I would love to see how Alex and Chloe's story concludes/continues. You could probably even just write a short wrap-up to it or something.
    But, with what you had of it, great job! Really enjoyed it. :)
    November 20th, 2017 at 05:14am
  • leaveyouhigh

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    I happen to really like this story,
    your doing a good job(:
    I think its different from other All Time Low stories I have read.
    update soon?
    April 17th, 2010 at 02:42am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    Oh snap! I feel like Lisa's gonna bring some drama....
    April 14th, 2010 at 10:38pm
  • randomshizzle

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    Hmm, I thought I'd commented on this when I first read a chapter; apparently not.
    Anyway, I felt so sorry for Alex when Chloe said they were best friends because he obviously wants more, but then she kissed him and I was like 'YES! <3'
    I hope Alex isn't just playing her to get further than Gabe, but he seems to really like her.
    I can't wait to read more and I think you're doing a pretty good job with this :)
    April 1st, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • SpinningInCircles

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    This is really good, update more soon? :)
    March 31st, 2010 at 06:40am
  • AmyGoesRawr!

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    I luvv this! Plezz update!
    March 30th, 2010 at 04:34pm
  • SpinningInCircles

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    I love this :)
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:38am
  • Emo-Chick217

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    Awe Alex was cute in this chapter :)
    March 28th, 2010 at 06:26pm
  • tq6776

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    "Your being horny again, Alex." When jack said that i cracked up! Ahhaha Alex got further than Gabe:-P Update soon please!
    March 26th, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • Emo-Chick217

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    I really like the story :)
    More up soon?
    March 26th, 2010 at 03:33pm