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  • michelle-y

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    OMG! LOVELOVELOVE!!!
    This chapter made me smile but it was also sad!
    aww the kiss on his mums cheek! cutttte! It reminds me at Burbs when Vella kissed his mummy! :)
    The following line, I love how you describe things in your story! :)
    "I didn't know Alex could sing. His voice was amazing; velvety smooth and serene."
    And I could just imagine them hugging. *sigh* They belong together!!!
    “I’m here Lex. Your Jacky’s here.”<<<< That line made me SQEEEEEE! awww
    I really really am loving the updates! Cant wait for more! <3
    April 18th, 2010 at 10:44am
  • michelle-y

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    What i always enjoy about your stories, is that you post long chapters, with so much information. :)
    I couldn’t get Alex out of my head.<<< That line mad me smile so big! Jack wants him, like Alex wants Jack :DDD
    I am glad they live near each other, because it gave them a chance to get to know each other better!
    I love how Jack calles Alex "lex". Its cute!
    The part where they were walking home together was cute!
    I cant wait to read how there relationship develops, and read about them getting closer and closer!
    :)
    April 18th, 2010 at 05:30am
  • leighabelle

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    Haha, I commented last time then noticed you updated again!
    Well, I loved this chapter, too. They totes want each other. =)
    April 18th, 2010 at 05:28am
  • leighabelle

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    Not gonna lie, I almost forgot about this story =/
    BUT I'm glad you're back!
    I loved this update!! So obvious that Bkat is/going to be crushing on Alex. ;)
    More soon???
    April 18th, 2010 at 05:16am
  • michelle-y

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    aww welcome back to this story!
    It has been ages! But I enjoyed the update and I like how you are using song titles for names of chapters. :)

    "stop checking me out and get changed"
    ooo Alex wants him haha ;)

    I really love how you bring the subject of teeth in, cause I know your obsession with teeth :)
    Update soooon xD
    April 18th, 2010 at 05:09am
  • Fangs Up.

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    You have to continue with this! Please?
    It was amazing
    In my head Alex had a heavy English Accent and it's funny tehe In Love.
    Anyway, I'm subscribing XD

    Zoe xx
    April 9th, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • KageLove

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    Amazing! I love it! You are a great writer and describe things very well in this story! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
    April 8th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    All of chapter two made me crack up. More soon?
    April 4th, 2010 at 03:50am
  • holdontomayquinn

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    Loved the update! More soon please! I am hooked!
    April 2nd, 2010 at 03:14am
  • perluhh!foo.

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    i'm really liking this so far!:) can't wait to see where you take it.
    April 2nd, 2010 at 12:27am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Hahaha.
    I like how Jack is with people.
    he's just amazing
    :D and so is Alex.
    I liked how you compared them two.
    So like
    more updates soon pleaseandthankyoumaybe?<3
    April 2nd, 2010 at 12:04am
  • michelle-y

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    Now Alex and Jack have met each other, I am excited to read more :)
    update soon :)
    April 1st, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • leighabelle

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    I loved it!
    I have a feeling this story is going to be awesome! =)
    March 30th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • amberisariot

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    sweet start :) totally subscribing.
    March 30th, 2010 at 12:10am
  • Forever Young.

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    love it! It was really well written and I think it's going to be a great story! Update soon? <33
    March 28th, 2010 at 07:58pm
  • NettieMustangxx

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    I love it!
    Very well written and I'll actually keep up with these updates :D
    I agree with Chelly, you always write in a way that gets people hooked from the start :]
    March 28th, 2010 at 12:22pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    i am subscribing! :D
    March 28th, 2010 at 09:20am
  • michelle-y

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    yay first chapter is posted :)
    Its weird reading something other than Australia haha xD
    I must say you never dissapoint with the start of your stories!
    I mean some people start stories and they don't interest me till a couple of chapters in!
    But I always enjoy the start of yours! :) Thought i'd let you know. haha
    I enjoyed the start! And i feel sorry for Jack! I am honeslty looking forward to more!
    March 28th, 2010 at 09:06am