YAY!! An update!! I loved it, but I did spot some errors. You had some words out of order. I can't remember where they are, I think one of them was a you :D. But I love it and love the length of the chapters!
My first Leland story and I love it!!! I can't wait to read more of it and I love how you're developing the characters! I don't like Jay's mom or her sister! But it makes the story good! I've subscribed, but more soon when you can!!!