Well, I really love this story. I have to say though, and I'm not sure if you're still editing, but I preferred your first version. The edited isn't as fun for me to read. That's just my opinion though, because I really like the story itself! And I can't wait for the sequel!
I have just finished reading your story from beginning to end. It is currently 5:56 am. I have stayed up all night because I simply couldn't stop reading. You story was excellent. You had a pleasant balance of action and calm, and you were able to create very well-rounded characters. And you stuck wonderfully to the Twilight character's original personalities. And you were able to keep your reader interested and on the edge of their chair to find out what will happen next. I truly enjoyed this story, and I would love to see you write a sequel to it. You are an extremely talented writer, with even more potential. I can't wait to see more stories from you!
Amazing story... I hope you start the squel soon i wanna know about what happens? With them... And if chris imprint on someone soon... Your an amazimg writer
So you know they are not step brother and sister. they are half they have the same dad. to be step sibling both parents are different. Just throught i tell you. pther then that your story is great i really enjoy it. I'm Still in the middle of reading it through
OH. MY. GOD. What just happened? She can't be dead! I'm crossing my fingers she's not. So maybe will learn a little bit more about her and the way the vile came about, and her ancestry soon?