Where Truth Lies - Comments

@ Abbycus Forensicus
THANK YOU! That means so much! I'm actually taking a break from writing fiction on Mibba because I want to work on something I can publish...though it hasn't gotten very far lol :P

Please come back to this story! As an avid reader / watcher / researcher of most things serial killer, forensic science, criminal profiling related things I was thrilled to find this story which is an excellent addition to the genre. I can tell from reading this that you are well read, and you have the skills required to write a great murder mystery and keep the characters fresh and interesting. I like the injections of facts and information into your story - something that a lot of writers tend to leave out. It adds another depth to the plit and the characters and it makes a refreshing change from thE drive of the story. My only criticism is regarding some of the character's behaviour and the profiling of the killer, some of It is a little off the mark in regards to classic examples of behavioural patterns, but aside from that I loved it. Cassidy reminds me of Clarice Starling from Silence of the Lambs. She appears young and in some aspects naïve but incredibly driven and motivated. Percy is a complete suck up but I enjoy his character as a contrast to the others, he is a sort of comic reliefe, someone to annoy us but someone we still don't hate. If you're familiar with CSI: Crime Scene Investigation you'll be familiar with David Hodges and his siminal antics and annoying need to come out on top. I really hope you return to this story - as a fan of crime fiction, especially of the serial killer variety - this is the kind of thing I have been looking for since I joined Mibba. It is so well written and plot driven and multi-layered that I am thoroughly addicted to it. I would very much like to see a novel of this and even another case featuring the same detectives. You have an incredible talent and I'm very pleased that not only are you sharing it with Mibba you're also putting your time into such a brilliant story such as this one. Now hurry off and contact a publisher, something tells me you're going to be the next big thing.

This...Is...AMAZING!
I love all of your stories!
No lie,you are a great writer !
Please write more soon!

Can't wait for the next one! I just can't wait to find out what happens in the end but at the same time I really don't want it to end because I love it so much!! It really should be a novel, all your stories should! Amazing stuff..... Love it

God fucking damn, this story is so fucking phenomenal; and just saying, I don't really swear... THIS SHOULD BE A NOVEL, I'm not even joking.

Putting the title at the end, oh clever but you didn't fool me. ;]

I don't know if I enjoy the blood and guts or knowing the details more.

It's a toughie. (not a quickie. That's too ickie. And stickie. Like Vickie with a hickie. I read that once on Wiki.)

I know this was posted a while ago but I just read the most recent chapter and I LOVED IT. Oh my gosh, this is an incredible story, worthy of even more views! It's literally the only thriller on this website that I actually love! I hope you can continue it, despite you saying that you're not going to write a horror story again. But technically it's not a horror story but a thriller story sooooo you have to keep it :)

Ahhhh I really want to find more about Sebastian. I hope he's okay so we can hear what he has to say about everything!

aww sebastian you idiot,why he drink the watttrer????
More please :)

KEEP WRITING!!! I love the updates <3

AHHHH I actually adore this! You are truly amazing and should get published so we can go buy all your books and have them forever! Go you =]

Really good !!! It's intense !! Haha I love how it takes in Canada cause its easier to understand :D

It's so intense! You build up the suspense so very well, and I can't wait to finish each new chapter.

I just got to the last chapter and I am in love. :D I like how smart the killer is! Annnnnnnnnnnnnd I have a vague idea of who it might be. I'm a good CSI, what can I say :P

OKAY, I'm gonna comment again:

1. Truth was a serial liar.
2. Percy was a douchebag
3. Det. Warren was crazy
4. Mr. Keller was definitely evil and
5. Percy was a douchebag.

PAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAH

Regarding your note on bottom of chapter two:
Are you crazy woman!? I love CSI, I've watched all the episodes in all cities! That was totally CSI.
Man, I love this. :D

I haven't read this since you rewrote it.
So I am doing it now.
Reading I mean... hehe.. words can be misleading :P

xoxox

Dilek

I'm so glad that you've updated! It's been too long, haha.

Robert Hansen sounds like a psychopath. Did you do a lot of research for this chapter? Cause I've never heard of that guy before and neither have I heard about burying virgins under the London Bridge before. It's interesting but also...very creepy, which is the perfect effect for the story (:

Hi there =]

As you probably know, I am an avid reader of your other stories. I praise your writing prowess to my friends, even. This story is no exception. I ADORE Jerome Sutherland, for some strange reason that I can't quite decipher. Cassidy gets on my nerves a little, if only because I'm eager to see her loosen up, although that's not quite her job.

Might I just say, this is a really clever idea for a story. I love the way you chose to introduce all the characters, and the symbolism of Truth as a liar. It puts everything into context, and makes you think: what and who exactly can you trust? There's so many different levels to this story, and just when I think I finally understand all the characters, there's another layer! There are so few well written crime fiction stories on this site - fewer still that are bearable when reading. You have a unique gift, Andi!

Percy's a jackass, too. I love it.

There's one more thing... the last chapter you updated, you seemed to have little confidence in. But I personally think it was the best so far. Adam.... =] his character is supposed to be annoying, I can tell, but I like him even more than I like Jerry. I admit my first instinct when he was telling Cass about the nursery rhyme was 'I am going to laugh so hard if Cass ends up falling for him only to find out he's the killer and has been playing her all along'. Not that that's going to happen. I just thought it would be funny =] I can totally see a smart, abrasive guy like that being the killer.

Anywho... once again, I love your writing. Definitely keep this. Three thumbs up! I can't wait to see where this goes!

I've read up to chapter five and am thoroughly amazed by this story. I'll read the rest later and comment but this is brilliant
your characters are in depth well described and you bring out small parts of their back story seamlessly, which is where many writers fail because they try to cram to many descriptions of the characters in at inappropriate points.
I'll read the rest later but so far this is amazing :D