Where Truth Lies - Comments

First off, props for setting it in Toronto. Second off, props to writing a crime story. And props for is being so damn good! And the title of the story, I'm sorry, but is ingenious and I can't stop thinking "hot damn, that is a good title!"

I can't wait for more, I'm hooked!!

oh damn, he might be the killer or witness

Oh dang. This is gettin good.

Hmm, how did Levi know?
He's an asshole, but I don't think he did it.

Levi's a creep but yet he's appealing..hmmm :)
I liked this chapter
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I love this story, I have sooo many questions and I can't wait for them to be answered!

I definitely like this story more than Guide.

Oh yay! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

I like this chapter, as usual. Levi sounds like an ass. But I suppose that makes things very interesting. I wonder why Eloide is though, since she's not dead (or at least they haven't found a corpse, haha. I'm not going to rule anything out).

And what has the other guy got to do with this case? :)

Levi Balmer rocks!
" you wanna know what I think?" " not really" this made me laugh...XD
I like this!

Love this! Awesome as usual!

Ah, finally all caught up with this story. Guessishouldgetcaughtupwithalltheotherones.

Anyhow, wonderful updates, as usual. Definitely can't wait for the next one.

Although I agree with the person above me, he could be. But so could Elodie, since earlier in your story it said they best friends and enemies or something of that sort? I can't remember, horrible memory when it comes to small details. AND if Elodie found out if Truth was lying to her and she didn't take lying to well... yeah, I dunno. Just a hunch. xD

Wow Levi seems like he would be the murderer now but I think it's to soon to tell since the story just started a few chapter ago.
Please update soon :)

Yay, you updated!

As always, it was a lovely update.
:)

Um. Hi. This totally kicks ass. I just love, love, love the way the prologue is written... so amazing. <33 (:

So I was really apprehensive about this story. I don't like murders and ect. Which is odd because I like writing darker stories, but I hate watching dark movies/reading dark stories.

But moving on, I actually really like this story. It's interesting and has a lot of twists and turns and mystery and so on and so forth.

I took CSI at school. Yes, it was actually offered (people usually give me weird looks whenever I tell them I took it) and was a really fun class. My teacher was an ex cop and he loved his job and you could just tell how much he missed doing it.

But the one problem with taking that class is that it kind of ruined CSI the show for me. I used to love that show and I used to watch it all the time. Our teacher had us watch a lot of videos in that class (mainly Forensic Science and those kind of shows) but once in a while he'd let us watch CSI. But we always had to list down the things that CSI is doing wrong and would get in trouble.

Basically the point is, I notice all the small things whenever I watch CSI now. They're not wearing gloves; they're not wearing their uniforms; they didn't take pictures; they said the wrong terms/things; that cut would actually be deeper on his right side, not his left, if he actually cut himself that way; the blood splatter is wrong. The list seriously goes on.

The (kind of) funny thing about Jerry, and how he's not disturbed about dead bodies reminds me of something my teacher said.

He told us about the first time he saw a dead body it was on Halloween. Someone was drunk or something and passed out on the train tracks and the train basically decapitated him. He said it was so funny because it really didn't both him while it bothered some of the other cops. And he was standing there, sucking on a tootsie roll.
But when he was driving home he ran over a squirrel and he felt bad.

Which he thinks it's horribly wrong to think it's funny.

But here I am, going on about me and whatever when I should be talking about your amazing story.
So pat yourself on the back, I am subscribed to all of your stories…and I feel like a total story stalker haha.

Anyways, I love this twisted story of yours.

Update soon.
:)

wow its a really intresting story, you're a good writer = )

Oh my god! Update soon it's absolutely amazing (:
I love all of the characters and the chapters are flowing really well together (:

wowzers this looks REALLY good. five chapters in and I'm hooked already! Keep it up; I can't wait to read the rest :D

I really like this story. It's quite interesting any mysterious.

Basically, I get super excited every time you update any stories of yours, so I'm insanely excited about this one too!