Where Truth Lies - Comments

  • break.my.bones

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    Aww I love all of your characters!
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:40pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Aw. Sad home life.

    Great chapter!
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:16pm
  • jgwt

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    i feel like truth isn't dead.
    is that weird?
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    Ah love this!
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • end.of.forever

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    Tom and Jerry, huh? Very catchy

    I liked how you brought in Truth's past. It makes me extremely curious as why she and Eloide fought and why she'd asked her out. If there was something more to that night. And I hate Mr. Keller already. Stupid alcholic.

    Is there something between Cass and Jerry? Cos it just sounds very promising ;)
    June 7th, 2010 at 09:29am
  • Apollo 13

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    The more this progresses, the more I get sucked in to the story.
    Oh, and I promise I am not just commenting because I don't want a killer after me.
    Although, that many be a tiny part of it haha :P
    June 7th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • helloxthere

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    hahaha Tom and Jerry, that's great! After every chapter of this story, I feel the urge to say "dun dun dun"
    June 7th, 2010 at 06:49am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    I really loving the story :D
    It's so original and kinda scary. I like it!
    This one time, this girl forgot to comment on this story and when she went to bed, a mass murderer crept into her room and killed her.

    True story.
    I'm glad I comment on everything :)

    Update soon please! :)
    June 6th, 2010 at 11:37pm
  • morning glory.

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    I can't wait to read more! :) Update?
    June 3rd, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • end.of.forever

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    I liked the original.

    But I have to say--this one is really much more interesting. Glad that you're continuing this story! :D
    June 3rd, 2010 at 08:56am
  • BlackEyes

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    wouldn't want to get murdered.. so here i am typing this.
    Your writing's great! it gave me the creeps and it takes a lot to scare someone like me.
    June 3rd, 2010 at 06:33am
  • noski

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    can't wait for more!
    June 3rd, 2010 at 01:02am
  • mockingbird;

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    I AM FREAKING OUT

    I LOVE THIS!
    June 3rd, 2010 at 12:02am
  • permanentdeclaration

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    Your author's notes really make me want to comment. So....here I am ;)
    June 2nd, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • Apollo 13

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    I love this!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • jellyfish-spine

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    You've made a young girl so very happy by re-continuing this story. This one girl commented on this story this one time, and she didn't get killed. True story.
    June 2nd, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • break.my.bones

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    Ahh I like this version much better :)
    June 2nd, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • helloxthere

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    haha well I was planning on leaving a comment anyway, but now that a mass murderer is involved I better make it good! I love this story, I'm glad you are writing it again and I like all the extra detail you are adding! It makes it even more interesting and addicting!!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 08:00pm
  • Caravaggio

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    I'm really liking this so far. Can't wait to see more!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 07:37pm
  • RazzleBazzle

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    Since I'm totally afraid of murders and used to have to check under my bed every night for a very long time I thought I'd leave another comment saying how much I love this!!! It's a brilliant idea for a story!! Love it!
    June 2nd, 2010 at 07:21pm