I liked how you brought in Truth's past. It makes me extremely curious as why she and Eloide fought and why she'd asked her out. If there was something more to that night. And I hate Mr. Keller already. Stupid alcholic.
Is there something between Cass and Jerry? Cos it just sounds very promising ;)
The more this progresses, the more I get sucked in to the story. Oh, and I promise I am not just commenting because I don't want a killer after me. Although, that many be a tiny part of it haha :P
I really loving the story :D It's so original and kinda scary. I like it! This one time, this girl forgot to comment on this story and when she went to bed, a mass murderer crept into her room and killed her.
You've made a young girl so very happy by re-continuing this story. This one girl commented on this story this one time, and she didn't get killed. True story.
haha well I was planning on leaving a comment anyway, but now that a mass murderer is involved I better make it good! I love this story, I'm glad you are writing it again and I like all the extra detail you are adding! It makes it even more interesting and addicting!!
Since I'm totally afraid of murders and used to have to check under my bed every night for a very long time I thought I'd leave another comment saying how much I love this!!! It's a brilliant idea for a story!! Love it!