that was so sad! DX!!! :( Well... at least he'll be coming back... That "And then there were three" line feels really foreboding and scary... I don't like it... Am I reading too far into this... maybe... but I'll keep thinking it so that way it either won't be as sad... or I'll be really happy... one of the two... I'm glad that they all have each other though. It was really great that they were able to comfort each other... I just hope that Gregory will be okay too. poor thing.
It was a really good update ^.^ but just so you know, you aren't allowed to ransom updates for comments.... you can get banned for that, it's in the mibba guidelines.... It's clearly stated, you can get reported so I don't recomend doing it continuously
I was so confused when I saw the new layout but I really like it! :D!! That was really adorable. :) And that's really great for James, that's certainly not something that's easy to tell your dad about.
To me, your story is starting to lose its oomph. Its now basically about horny teenage boys. To me, thats not very interesting. Im only voicing my opinion. You are free to disagree.