Eyes of the Devil - Comments

Uhhh it might be because it's like 6:30 in the morning, but I honestly can't predict anything haha. I'm wondering if Frank is actually an Angel and he secretly knows what's going on but trying to uhhh pretend he doesn't O_o Lame yes but that's all I got at the moment
Anywho
franking wonderful!!!!!
-Ang.

hahaha Frank's got a mission I presume? This story is wonderful!

Perfection, as usual.

Quotes from 'The Raven' really pulled the strings tighter, horsie.
I'm - I'm speechless.
I cannot wait to see where this is going.
-shanks Ray- (:

Great job!

happy_pills982:

ooo
never have I seen "the raven" used in a way that actually makes sense to a story.
so..now ray is working for the devil?
*gasp* BAD RAY!

i absolutley loved the last line because i can really see it happening. maybe i'm just clinically insane like that...

Quoth the Raven... Nevermore.

P.S. i think you spelled antivenom wrong....

I looked it up and everything. It's just another word for "antivenom." :mrgreen:

ooo
never have I seen "the raven" used in a way that actually makes sense to a story.
so..now ray is working for the devil?
*gasp* BAD RAY!

i absolutley loved the last line because i can really see it happening. maybe i'm just clinically insane like that...

Quoth the Raven... Nevermore.

P.S. i think you spelled antivenom wrong....

Gah, thats such a damned good idea, using the Raven!
This was the best chapter yet, I must say. It was so...there was just so much anticipation and mystery involved. I really loved it.
And Ray?! Perfect. XD
More when you can! (please update soon! :D)
(also, when you said "antivenin" did you mean anti-venom?)

For lack of better words... Just wow... Awesome with The Raven bit you added in there, it just added to the whole aura of the story.
Sooo... Ray works for the Devil now? Correct me if I'm wrong though. I can't wait for the next chapter, everytime i get an update e-mail for this story I get really, really anxious and click immediatly on the link. Love it, love it, love it!

Dude, that was AWESOME how you pulled The Raven in to it. *Shudders excitedly* DAMN! Shit that was perfect... an AWESOME poem to go with an INCREDIBLE story. Frank has a destiny too, huh? *is very curious*
I was about to say that this was my favorite chapter so far, but remembering how much I loved the other chapters (especially the first and second), I'll just have to say that it's on par with the other chapters. Which really doesn't do it justice, but this story is just SO amazing, that that's a real feat of its own. I guess I could say that it ties with the first and second chapters. But really, still.

Ray!? Ahhh I love this.
I really want to know what Frank's destiny is now! You must update...and soon before my head explodes from anticipation.

-haute couture

Maybe it's just me, but you've just confused the hell out of me with this chapter. I think it's because of the sudden appearance of Frank in a different manifestation or something. Regardless, this is still a good update.

Sinister Bob is sinister :] I'd like to see where Bob's part plays into all of this.

Silly horsie! That wasn't a super short chapter.
It could be better described as in the limber between medium and short.
And that's called Shsedium.

Yepyep XD

Lovely update, horsie. OHH! And like, I soooo didn't know that Lyn-Z was gonna be God. Like EHMYGAWD.
Haha. Dorky part? I knew that for about three weeks. >.<

O_O
WRITE.
MORE.
NOW!!!!

one question, though i doubt you'll answer me beacuse it will have some humungous thing to do with the story:

Who was the blue eyed man Gerard met in the city?

Holy fuck mcnuggets on a stick.

just leave me hanging like that why don't you.
beetch.
nah, just kidding.

but do you realize how fucking amazing you are?
honestly?

i loved this chapter bunchees.
it was amazing.
&& one word
bob.

RIIIIGHT?!?!?!?!

hehehehehehe. ;]
you fucking rock.

Okay time for Angela's predictions!!!
:DD
I'm guessing Mr. Mysterious dude is Bob!!!

I wish I could say more
but I'm speechless, no joke O_O
Its amazing, I love the ideas you have

IUGRIUHWETATGERJUB WOW!

This is way awesome! I had to catch up on a few pages (since I haven't really been reading much lately) But it leaves me in awe.
Brilliant.

-haute couture

What the FUCK!?!? You left me HANGING! Damn straight the chapter was too short!!!

“Did you ever take the gun from someone’s hand?” the man asked quietly. “Or have you stopped a boy from leaping off the edge of a skyscraper?” He was closer now, standing directly in front of Gerard. “Did you ever snatch the razor away from the ever-cliché teenage girl?”

That has to be the best quote. Ever. It epitomizes everything I've wanted to say to every dumbass little MCR "fan" who says that My Chem has saved their life, even though they don't even have a story to prove that, because they just want to say it and go along with the crowd. Idiots.

This story is really cool. It's so original and fascinating. I like the supernatural, paranormal themes in it; it's very impressive, since a lot of MCR stories are mostly just crap, with romancey cliches.

Wow, this is a really awesome story, I must say. It's a great combination of dark tales and fantasy and it's really just excellent. I love the way you incorporated the black parade and the history of mcr and certain things like that, you know what I mean?
I also love how to bring the reader straight into the story.

A ribbon of flowing embers wove like a serpent across the flat expanse, neatly severing it in two and creating a visible boundary.
God, that's incredible description.

Kudos for making God a woman! :D

“Ah, but is not the road to Hell paved with good intentions?”
That's perfect!

Really, it's one of the most unique stories I've read here! I can't wait to see what happens next!
The grammar and punctuation are damn near perfect, and the the ideas you have are pretty incredible.
More when you can!

Hmm something tells me Gerard's on Earth now.
I'm still trying to figure out if he's just a ghost or if he's alive......