A Dustland Fairytale - Comments

I love this. <333

I absolutely love this. I love Dean. He makes me smile. YOu do an amazing job writing from his POV :) Love it :) :) :) :D :D: D: P :P :P

Veryy Good; Keep up the good work! (=

yes it seems very different to 'Great Expectations' which is lovely :)
Dean is a dream. Well as much as a teenage boy can be haha.

oh and now i have to dig out 'The Outsiders' because you've made me want to watch it again haha.

It seems like a completely different story in his view...but that's good :)
Sodapop Curtis-that made me laugh :)

so this sequel is the prequel re written in deans pov?
thats cool!
keep writing!

Finally got around to reading this. And I love it. You write guys' perspectives very well :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

Awwww dean! Great start to the story! More soon, loved the prequel

fyi; i can see the writing perfectly fine & i love the background.
maybe the people that can't read it have a high resolution? or something.

I guess I lied must just have been my phone...

I love the end of the prolog!
I cant wait to see everything in his side of the story!
xD

i'm so excited for next chapter! :)
keep it up!

yeah i love the first chapter but it would really help if the writing was a different color. I love the background but its hard to read and it sort of blends in. Otherwise then that, I loved it.
Oh yes, I should problably introduce myself as your newest reader. See i found Great Expectations yesterday and I sat down and I read the whole thing (It was amazing!).
So now im subscribed to the sequel =D

please continue!

Hey your background blends in with the story or the other way around you should change it so we can read it withut hightlighting it with the cursor. Thanks!

I LOVE IT ALREADY!!! (: <3

See Dean's more complex then the average 'badboy'
which is of course a good thing.
:)

awwww is this in Deans POV!!?
cause that would be great! hahah
*subscribes*
I cant wait for the first chapter xD

ok you can begin now
;)

Is this going to be basically the story of Great Expectations, except in Dean's pov??? B/c if it is, I can't wait to read it if you're doing it after Great Expectations. :) I'm already subscribed. And excited. :) :D :P