Quiet Like The Snow - Comments

Everything in this one shot is so beautiful that I can't bother to even copy and paste certain passages. It would literally blow my freaking brains out of my head.So let me just say, that it takes a certain kind of writer to put a ton of describing words in a story, and still keep a reader wanting more.

You, are one of those amazing few.

Firstly, I'd just like to say that I adore the layout.
So cute. And the title is adorable. >.<

The writing style you use is so eloquant, it's beautiful.

I enjoyed this quite a lot darling.

Once he stepped outside he was greeted with delicate kisses from the weary breeze, struggling through the dynamic metropolitan
This made my day, it kind of wakes you up into the scene after the small section beforehand. Your whole sentence structure, vocabulary and flow all mold perfectly. I absolutely adore this, its one of my favourite pieces ever.
You have a way with words. You don't do things by halves, but no-one would want you to anyway. I simply adore this, your writing is incredible.

Wow. This was really well-written. I loved it.

This was amazing! Everything fit perfectly, with hardly any mistakes whatsoever. It was beautiful.

I could read it all day. Amazing...

Minuscule, milky orbs danced down onto the earth, seizing everything underneath victim to the hoarding amounts. The snow had layered over everything, causing each surface to glisten with a refreshing impression. Additional flakes continued to drift below with no suggestion that it would slacken in the near future.

I can literally see the snow flakes dancing across my face with these description. And this coming from someone who's never actually seen snow in her whole entire life.

The peaceful crystals floating through the air in a content hush, how envious he was of them. The harmony that they resided in.

Perfection. Beautiful imagery.

The ending was such a contrast to the rest of the story, to the first few paragraphs. It was unexpected, and I liked that. Sometimes, one shots get boring in their predictability. All in one, this was beautifully written. Just perfect.

Wow. Wow. Wow.
Your description was beautiful.
Spot on, vivid.
You simply took my breath away with your vast vocabulary
and your ability to paint a picture with words as well as any artist can with a paint brush.

I agree with False Illusions;
I mean, God, it was so beautiful.
I loved the imagery and the title. And the
descriptions! Loved it all (:
Brilliant job, hun <3

This is a really well written one-shot. You're a talented writer.

A masterpiece, throughout.

Doctor

This was truly beautiful. I could sit here all day quoting you flawless descriptions but I'd basically be quoting the entire story. You have such a way with words, pure talent. This was a joy to read - I'm lost for words.