She managed to push him away. “Get away from me.”Darn her stupid conscience. Man. That was so horrible. It made me wanna cry when she said that. Youu should so update this story. It's great. It has an awesome storyline going on too.
as i just started writing my own, i'm find it hard to incorporate people specking in an interesting way. i love how you do this, its always easy to follow, and never the same way over and over like the normal "he said, she said".
your story is one i will be sure to seek inspiration from when i get stuck! so thanks!
aww, poor Gee, why can't Kath just live a little???? things could be so much easier hey, you should make Makaihla go scuba diving and get her eaten by a shark (if that's how you spell it ^ ..i don't take too kindly to jerk characters XD) (i guess you wouldn't know unless you read the fanfic Seasick. . .) keep it up, this story is great!:D <3
"Was it because they both shared the feeling of loosing someone dear to them?" Losing not loosing and The position they were in almost Gerard aroused, well this could be re-worded many ways, but you see what I'm saying :D
Now those two little things have been said, I can demand updates and tell you how incredibly brilliant this story is. Really, every update of this just makes me happy. You have a relaxing flow and Katherne is just a great all round character. She's well formed and believable.
Please -for the sake of my sanity- update soon! :D
Loved that chapter a lot The music choice was wonderful. I remember that movie, well that scene anyway, for the life of me I can't remember which movie it was though. Anyway, the kiss scene was great. Can't wait to see where they go from here.
I think this is really good. I liked how Gerard was a nasty teacher in the beginning, it was a nice change compared to other student/teacher stories. I also like how it didn't go fast and had a nice progression I just think you should be careful, sometimes you over use a word. I think if you used a thesaurus you're writing would sound more eloquent. Oh, and I liked the vocabulary you use. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Please update soon!
:D