Young Girl - Comments

Oh my goodness,
I LOVE this.
Nothing is too fast and nothing is completly too far fetched.
Grammar and spelling is a tad bit iffy, but isn't everyone's?

One of the best Gerard/OC fics I've read in a good while!
Can't wait for the next chapter =]

Ahhhh, that was SUPERRR intense!
I wonder what Mikey's gonna do when he finds outtt.
I can't freaking wait to find out what happens?

Eeep! It's so exciting! What's going to happppppeeeeeennnnnn?????

Aw! :D They're in for an awkward art project now.

I wonder if Mikey will catch on..

Love this!! Update soon =]

Love this, as always!
That was great, numnummy :D
More soon?
xD

nice. i like that the plot's progresssing, although i think it was a little too much in katherine's head, and then it suddenly switched with gerard's actions... also, i couldn't help but notice Katherine's personality seemed very different from what i remember. was that intentional?

You're welcome! It was fun making it!! I loved the chapter that you wrote!! I did find some mistakes, like saw on the disney channel is one (instead of saw at), and where you have seized it's ceased to exist. That was all I found. I thought there was another but I reread it and didn't find it!! Anyways, yay their first kiss!!

That was so incredible, aww :) This story is my favourite. Aww they are so adorable together, this story should be made into a film its that great. You are such a brill author you know. XX

Yea! They kissed! Awesome cant wait for more!

Love this chapter and please continue. It's finally about a time! They kissed, but they knew it was wrong. Even though it felt right between them. I am sure that next chapter will be awkward between them for awhile until they will feel give up and know what they want. :)

Okay, I normally don't comment on any story I read. This has to be my first comment on a story since I made an account. But it's well worth it, I love Young Girl so much that I'm faking sick right now so that I can finish reading it, because I couldn't read it all last night. Lol.

You're a brilliant author, and only 14? Wow that is young, but I'm the same age so whatever. However, I CANNOT write like you. I don't think I know anyone who can at your age. Even some people I know well into their 20s and 30s who write for a living can't write as great as you can.

Yea, this is long so I'll wrap it up....WAIT. Just read your author's description, me being the creep I am. Nice choice in bands, and I completely agree with you about that music thing. Okay, this is REALLY long. Maybe this is why I decided never to comment on anything. Anyway, BYEBYE!

You know what? This chapter was wonderful :] It felt pretty real :D I loved how he was so.. happy. And how she was happy that he was happy :D
It made me happy XDXDXD

Glad I could be of service :)

Very pretty descriptions this chapter.
Wonderful!
Ooo, he's being nice, it's so cute!!!!
XD

Freaking. Awesome.
That's all I have to say :]

Great update
They really do make a cute couple.
More soon!

awww my favorite chapter of all. lol update soon, it's addictive.

When I see this story has been updated it puts a huge smile on my face and I put everything on hold to read it straight away its that amazing. I love it so much and I also love the pace its going, i hate rushed stories, all the flirting before the relationship is the best :D xx

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i love it! can't wait for more. its my favorite so far from all the stories im reading.