Dear Stranger - Comments

This is wonderful, I'm glad Colorful Language commented on one of my stories, because I discovered this.

I think everyone feels the way that this 'stranger' does every now and again. which is why this is such a great piece of writing. It's honest and awesome. I love it and am going to subscribe so you better keep adding more (that's not a threat or anything). :)

I really like stories like these.
There sad, but somewhat inspiring.
I like this concept and how theres a co-author too
I like the way the chapters are written too and how its signed at the end depending on the chapter.
Its really good =)

-Katie

Dear Strangers,

How do you do it? This story I just found while wandering around mibba, and I'm instantly hooked. I appreciate that this is original fiction, and a very original idea in the process. You have made me feel for these character(s), even though all we see of them is their writing - no names, no faces. I'm able to relate to some of this - I'm not popular either, I put on a face, especially around those I see often, I have dirty little secrets that I feel guilty for, I can't seem to hold on to the time that I have, and it passes before I know it, and though I'm not popular, or well loved, I feel like the person casting the shadow onto others. And you two are what - 15? 16? - and you have written something that I rank above some of the published works I've read. You write spectacularly, especially in this style, and I'm glad that I wandered into this story - or I might have never known.

From,
A Jealous and Appreciative Friend

this is quite good

This is a wondeful idea! A neat way to write, and you write it amazingly.

I'm not fond of the layout, but that's not too important.
My favorite part is how you end each letter with "guilty" stranger or "jealous" stranger,
depending on what the letter talked about. That's brilliant.

After the third or fourth chapter, the story started to get a bit repetitive and boring.
Try giving the readers some incentive every now and then to continue reading.
Throw in some excitement!

But other than that, I really enjoyed this. <3

I love this, it's a really good idea!

I really love the idea of this. Seriously. <3

skulks from class to class
I think you meant sulks. XD

Very interesting:)

ooh, i liked the idea of this, i havent read anything like it before, it was good :)

I like this, quite a lot. It's different and it's meaningful.
This is well written and I think it's very original.

I really liked this. I read the first chapter, and just the idea of writing letters to no one intrigues me. I felt bad for her in a way because she doesn't like herself and doesn't understand why anyone would, but the amazing part is that she's not afraid to admit it to anyone, how she feels about herself. Loved it.

Cool story (:

Very original, very intriguing. I like both of the writing styles... they're both very beautiful and poetic. This is great! :D

This is fantastic. I love it a lot <3

Story Review Game

Letter 1
one of those introverted kids who sits in the back those introverted kids who sit
know for a fact don't like a face doesn't

I thought this first letter was rather sad. It reminded me of someone I used to know. Who was such an outcast, and was bullied so bad that they endedup hanging themselves. It was very much like that, and very sad. I liked it very much. The emotion was very raw and real.

This is really interesting.
Like Alu said, very original.
I like your writing style.
It's very good.

This is a very interesting idea, and I can't to see where you go with it.
I think you capture the different emotions well, also.

It is an interesting concept, and I loved chapter three.

The third chapter was based upon such a seemingly insignificant moment, yet important to her, and how it portrayed how those less fortunate are treated in a modern community - It's rather sad, yet true.

This is a really great story. I can relate to the first letter.

I like how each one has its own meaning and how it shows how all of them let out what they're feeling.

This is awesome