Again! Amazing! My goodness, you are an extreamly talented writer! I'm very jealous! hahaha! I love how when you write you seem to embody this character. I can tell that you know your character well, and aren't figuring her out as you go. I hate that! haha! Anyways, I'm only on chapter 3 right now, but I can't wait to read more of this and all of your stories. I'm kind of addicted right now :)
So, I thought I'd already commented on this. Hmmm, sorry about that. But this was really a truely amazing story. And very unique to boot. (: It's rare to find something that stands out and is different and you've written something to fit into that catagory. Congradulations. (: And congradulations on the ten stars. (:
Aww! Perfect ending! I love how Oliver was all sneaky and didn't allude to anything and then BAM! he takes her by surprise. Her speech? AMAZING. Wish I could give a speech like that.