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HYPERxSHADOW666 (100)

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*NOT annoyingly simple haha sorry

April 26th, 2014 at 07:29pm

HYPERxSHADOW666 (100)

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*NOT annoyingly simple haha sorry

April 26th, 2014 at 07:29pm

HYPERxSHADOW666 (100)

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The story kind of confused me, but I enjoy your writing style. It's annoyingly simple but not too complex. However there were some grammar mistakes, and it took away from me enjoying the story.

The characters seem alright but you could develop them more, but I do like May. I like the inside look at her home life, but she seems to be a pretty confusing person. Good job and keep it up!

April 26th, 2014 at 07:29pm

Sheikara (200)

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I really enjoyed the first chapter, but after that it got a bit tedious for me. That’s no reflection on your writing, which is wonderful by the way; I just couldn't get into the plot.

However, I do like the character of May. For some reason I really like those types of rebellious, apathetic characters. I also love the title. I'm not really sure why, I just do.

July 9th, 2012 at 10:39pm