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  • Nick Stokes.

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    YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!
    =D
    July 15th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    So now that I'm caught up on this....

    Alexis is adorable.
    Jack's a natural with kids.
    I love how Matt doesn't want to help.
    Maria's a bitch.
    I love Mia.
    The twins' mom is pretty much awesome.
    If Jack falls in love/lust/SOMETHING with Cassadee I swear to god I will find him and kill him.

    I think that just about covers it.... But no matter what, this story = ♥
    :)
    June 7th, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    mhm yesss i loveeeeee <3
    April 28th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    ugh. Why won't Jack just break up with Cassadee already?
    It's not fair on her, or Alex!
    And yeah. Maria's a bitch. >:|
    Her mum's pretty damn cool, though. ^_^
    xx
    April 26th, 2010 at 07:47pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    I'm not sure what's gonna happen
    but I love this story
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    So update when you can?!
    <33
    April 26th, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    Awwwwh!
    I can't believe she's sick. That's horrible.
    "Don't leave me, daddy." ah, that's so sad! Poor thing.
    D;
    xx
    April 21st, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    aww i hope things go ok! i would have commented sooner if i had know that you updated, it didn't tell me! stupid notifications, haha. anyways great job sweets! =D
    April 21st, 2010 at 05:56am
  • leighabelle

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    "Don't leave me, daddy."
    Oh, way to break my heart! She is just adorable.
    I don't even know what else to say other than this is awesome!
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:08am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Awwwh Alexis is so adorable
    makes me smile inside
    but I'm slightly saddened
    that she is sick
    :(
    I hope everything goes well
    :)

    {ps; I told you I always read AND comment when you update
    always :]}
    April 21st, 2010 at 04:07am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Bonjour
    :]
    you updated, leading me to be very happy
    I love this story-and all of your writing for that matter-so very much
    and I honestly am not going to complain about you taking a while to update
    I'm not that kind of person
    so, in saying that
    update when you can, beautiful.

    :]
    April 21st, 2010 at 02:48am
  • leighabelle

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    Alexis is adorable!
    And Jack is so amazing.
    And Matt is awesome!
    And I love this so much.
    <3
    April 21st, 2010 at 01:10am
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    Jack is a natural. I love it. ^__^
    Matt with the Mickey figurines made me smile.He's way obsessed. :)
    I feel really sorry for Alex, having the baby just basically thrown at him with no fore-warning.
    Well. Hopefully Jack will keep his word, be there for Alex and break up with Cassadee, no?
    :)
    xx
    April 21st, 2010 at 12:38am
  • Nick Stokes.

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    awh ma gawd a baby g-karth :O
    ^^
    April 12th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    HOLY FRICKIN' CRAP!
    Alex. With a child. This something I cannot imagine.
    More plz. Now. O__o
    xx
    April 12th, 2010 at 06:12pm
  • iamFINE

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    xD Anyway, what I forgot to say last time: Thanks for updating =] This chapter was interesting. The rest of the story should be fantabulous! =p
    <3 Manda
    April 12th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • iamFINE

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    Jack leaned over, "Your wishes are coming true, you've got a kid."
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    Smartass. I love him ^.^ lol

    He slapped him, "Don't go there."
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    "OH NO HE DI-IN'T!"
    Oh, yes, Alex. He did.
    April 12th, 2010 at 05:10am
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    Alex stood up and buttoned his jeans, "We should get to the tent."
    "Looks like you got a tent of your own."
    He looked down and grumbled, walking to the bathroom.

    Hehehe, I laughed. And then I told my friend about it. And she was like "Yeah, I don't care..." Because she doesnt like them. So yeah. But I thought it was funnnaaayyy.
    And hah, Baby. I find it funny. Alex has a baby. Baby.Baby.Baby.

    Yeah, I'll shut up now. :] Updates soon?<3
    April 12th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • leighabelle

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    Was. Not. Expecting. That.
    Whoa.
    A kid?
    I'm way eager to read more now!
    April 12th, 2010 at 02:02am
  • Cameron Hurley;

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    The next fan stared at him with wide eyes, "Whoa, was that like epic or what? That was Maria, from Dear Maria, right? And you like, have an unknown child."

    Please tell me you are at least proud of that^^^^ because that was like epic.

    My god, I'm am dying that chapter blew me away. Oh and Matt Flyzik is pretty much amazing. Just thought you should know =D
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    whoa whoa whoaaaaaaa!!!!!!! for real!? a kid!? hot dayum! i wish maria wouldn't of been such a bitch and just dumped her on him but maybe he can bond better. =] and as long s alex doesn't get back together with her and cass...ugh i hate her i feel like she'll ruin jack. anyways, i loved the update and i can't wait for more darling! <3
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:28am