February 23rd, 2016 at 09:48am
This story is very nice. I especially liked the banner, thinking of updating my story a bit now XD
I really like stories with a supernatural element (hell I'm a mega Supernatural fan) and you combine that with the focus on a young person who obviously hasn't explored all aspects of the supernatural world yet, very interesting.
Your story is really good, I feel like you could describe the characters a little more but I get a kind of Keanu Reeve's Constantine feel from it. I loved that movie so I totally dig that vibe if that's what you're going for. The whole supernatural stories is what I've been coming across a lot lately in the comment swap. Overall I like it, just wish for more description of location and people. The chapters are a good length too, not crazy short but not a novel on their own. I'm content :-)