King of Empty Promises - Comments

YES!
You have no idea how happy this chapter made me!
Though I'm sad that there's one chapter left, but EEEEEE! They're back where they belong <3

FINALLY! they are back together thank you jesus praise the lord. CAN I GET AM AMEN?? anyway good wirting i almost cried and it was adorable beyond words

that was fucking amazing you almost made me cry haha. okay now they can go have babies

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! HOLY CRAPOLA! That chapter was freaking amazing! I am so happy their finally back together! I love how when she called Jack he was already in the room. I wasn't expecting that! Haha!
I can't wait for the final chapter. So sad it's over. : ( but I'm still happy! : ) kinda seeming bipolar there but oh well! Heehee! : )

oh my god.
when alex was comforting jack i was almost crying D:
it's just so cute.
and mallory needs jack.
jack needs mallory.
i love this story.
so much.
:')

you are really making me want another sequel to this... its too good not to have another sequel i mean come on!!!

Ahhhhh :)
I read it three times :DD
You've done it again, complete perfection

Only two more!?!? Why, why are you doing this to me? I love this it can't end. =(. ugh, fine. I'm glad Jack went to her and helped her, but I'm sad that she told him goodbye. But I think it'll be okay in the end!

Loved loved loved!

when it said the end i actually screamed at my laptop! hahah :)

jack the indian superhero :')
i can't wait for the next one.
ima go read your zack story now <3
update pleasess. :D

I am at least glad that Jack was there for her. I can't wait to read more and see what happens next.

OMG!!!!!!!!
Haven't read in such a looooong time!!!!!
Can't believe I missed this much!!!!

Better late than never for meeting with her dad.

And Jack did such a sweet thing, going to help her! They need each other so much, that it's just kinda idiotic that only the two of them don't notice it!
Nice Job!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next update!!!!

:O 2 more chapters!

I only just caught up. :(

Love it anyway!

They need each other like badly. >.<

Can't wait for more!

<3

I can't believe this is ending soon =(

Jesus, for a second I almost died then I kept reading and I was like phew. Anyways, it's annoying that she keeps pushing away. But I guess when you've been hurt by someone it does take time to trust and even let them back in.

Super cute that he went for her. I AWWED!! It's quite adorable. I know I should be like "I hate you Jack" but I feel sorry for him. Boys do stupid crap sometimes. They're irritating but we still love them. It's a curse I swear it is.

Well can't wait until the next update. You have a way of keeping us on our toes. It's like yes yes, and then no. But it's okay because it makes me want to read the next update.

Can't wait :)

OMG!

DUDE, WHEN I READ THE 'The End' I WAS ABOUT TO SCREAM AT SOMEONE!! ARGHH!! LOOK AT WHAT YOU ALMOST DID! YOU, YOU, YOU, MEANIE!! DON'T STOP MY HEART LIKE THAT!!!

AND ALSO, WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THAT?! ARRGHH!! GOODBYE? GOODBYE?!? WHY GOODBYE?!? ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS LEFT? WHY ONLY TWO? WHY NOT FIVE? WHY? WHY? WHY? HUH?

D: Argh, update soon please. You make me contradict myself, it is depressing. :)

OMG! IF THAT WAS THE END I WOULD HAVE KILLED YOU!!! haha jk jk! However, that was freaking amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =) But i didn't really like the ending; i guess that was just part of it lol. It's like they finally get back in each other's embrace and then Mallory screws it up! Jack is probably heartbroken =(

anyways...i LOVED it! Sad it is ending though =(

<3 Kelsey

Holy....BALLS.
Was NOT expecting that! But it was good!

He must get her back, like now. Before I take a tire iron to his head.

omg! but then you gotta do a threequel! haha this was an awesome chapter!

nononononononononononononononononononononooooooo! GAH
okay so first off the begining/the whole chapter was adorable until 'the goodbye' part!
AGH
women, update again (soon) plz! ahah

and as always, i loved the update, even though im still angsty T____T ahah