King of Empty Promises - Comments

okay you can ignore what i said about your other story b/c i went on your profile to discover that you already posted chapter 1 of a ZACK story...i guess that answers my question!! haha. well i'm gonna go read that now! ttyl!

<3 Kelsey

well it really seems like mallory needs jack now more than ever, even if she doesn't want to admit it to herself.

I get so excited when you update but then i'm like "oh wait, the story is almost over" and then i get sad. lol. and i want you to update part 2 but at the same time that means it's closer to being over. I don't want it to end!!! This is the best story i've read on here, and trust me i've read lots of them haha.

However, i am definitley looking foward to your Zack story (or whoever your writing over...i was just assuming it was Zack b/c it looked like he has gotten the most votes lol) You are an incredible writer, better than me. Keep up the incredible work girl!

<3 Kelsey

the way she still misses jack is adorable xD
they better be together by the end of this ;)
ill be outside your house with a pitchfork...
or something like that xD
so yeah.
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEE ;D

update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update!
:]
thooper dooper excited!

I'm excited to see what happens between her and her dad, but I kinda want it to go wrong and Jack turns up and makes her feel better.
I thought it was really cute that she still has Jack's clothes and the bit about the bracelet :D

love it
i hope jack goes to see mallory
x

I want a Zack story. Well actually I need a good Zack story. haha By the way, I can't wait for part two.

Oh and the AP mag...funny thing I didn't see Jack's face because my eyes were glued to Zack's abs. But because he's Jack it was probably epic.

Anyways, back to the story...Can't wait to find out what happens with her dad and as with Jack. Is she going to go running to Jack's arms after the lunch with her dad? Or is she going to run into him like right after the meeting? Is he going to be waiting for her when she gets home? So many possibilities. You must tell me soon.

O0o0o0o. That outfit was really cute by the way.

I can't wait to see what happens and what's said between her and her dad. That should be interesting in itself.

AND, i'm sorry I haven't messaged you the first chapter yet. I've come to HATE what i've written and I feel stupid for even sending it. Lol.
But, I will send it to you.

Meeep, I want you to keep updating, but every time I see your updates I get sad because I know that this story is coming to a close end :(

Well, I think that Jack and her should talk to each other, I think it'll be all good once they do (:

Update as soon as you can! I seriously cannot wait!!!

they need to make up already cause it was so cutte when they were together. i like the update thoughh

Oh goodness... I love seeing that you've updated, but at the same time it makes me sad, because it means that it's closer to being over.

Please post part 2 soon!

I don't want this story to end!!! :(
But still I want more chapters!!

Jack. Jack. Jack. Jack. A hundred times Jack :) I just read the first story and the sequel all night last! And decided I should comment :) But yeah, like I said before, I would like another Jack story :)

Ahhh NOW, it is getting good. Well, it's getting even more good ;]
Shiiiiiiiii. So much suspense in the last part of that chapter! Like I just wanted to jump in there and kill the tension between them and say, "TALK!" Haha.

Man, he better say something to her. BEFORE they part ways. Lord knows she's going to avoid him as best as she can when they get home. And vice versa
:o

biggest fail of my life...i read the chapter and got excited cuz i was hoping to read another chapter, i started clicking on the 'button' that would lead me to the next chapter, but the page didn't load...so i kept clicking and clicking....and then i realized their was no other chapter yet ><

yup, so love the update as usual!
super excited for them being on silent library!

I feel like a jerk for not commenting lately so I decided to make this one as long as I possibly can make it <3 [:

So, I absolutely like where all of this is going. I'm glad that Jack knows he needs to apologize, he's finally 'growing the fuck up' :D. I hope that his opportunity wasn't wasted because that'd be horrible. Maybe he could corner her sometime? But one thing that ticks me off is when the guy apologizes and the girl immediately falls under his spell and is like "ohh yeah. I forgive you, blah blah blah." But that's just me ^.-

Anyways, enough about me (I'm so egocentric :P) I think this story is going accordingly. I am deeply sad that it's going to end very soon :( I hope they get back together? OR MAYBE THERE IS GOING TO BE A THIRD PART TO THE STORY?!? -wink- -wink-

Update soon-ish (:

Gah! That was his chance and he missed it! Shoot, but something tells me they're going to be okay. *Le sigh* I'm going to miss this story.

You write very well, I must say. This whole story and the prequel are just amazing.

awww poor jack =(

i wish mallory had said something to him, how much she needed him. I want to see them back together! =( haha. and i have a feeling something is going to go wrong when she meets her dad.....hopefully her and jack would have made up by then so if something does go wrong, mallory can just turn to jack lol. but what do i know? I guess i'm just gonna have to wait and find out!

Great chapter! Can't wait for 26!! =)
p.s. i hope you like my t-shirt. I sent you picture links on your profile =)

-Kelsey

jack is so cute.
as long as a story has any all time low guy in, it's a good story xD
i love your updates! <3

omg poor jack.... thanks for updating. i kept checking all day yesterday haha