King of Empty Promises - Comments

I've been constantly checking my emails today, hoping for this to be updated.
Mallory needs Jack!
If only she had waited a couple of seconds longer, omg </3
I seriously can't wait for more, so everyone better hurry up and read it & comment so I can read more! xD

That was very nice of her. How sad that she ripped up the original letter. That must have broken her heart to see how in love she was at the time compared to now. I can't believe this story is coming to an end. It's so sad! Can there be third story? Then you'll have a trilogy! lol LOVE

oh this is so cute.
i hope they're back together by the end of this.
but the end?!?
ill be sad D:
update soon :)

Dude Jack better start using whatever brain cells he has left in that head of his (im talking about the head on top of his shoulders here although at least half of his brains cells are probably residing in the other head) and realizes that any girl that goes all the way up to NYC to get you a friggin guitar is a girl worth fighting for. If he doesn't realize it soon i swear i will steal on of Rian's drumsticks and shove it down his urethra!!! No, jk that would be cruel and i don't think i could live with myself if i hurt him that much, although sometimes he does deserve it( at least in this story he does).

that was a cute yet sad update :[
i love it all haha, im going to be sad when this story ends tho ><

omg love

Well i'm happy now b/c i got on here to find you posted a new chapter...yay! haha. =) But, i am also sad b/c this story is about to end =( However, i will definitly look foward to the new story you will be writing. Btw, when are you going to let us know which All Time Low member it's going to be about? lol.

anyways, I'm glad Mallory decided to give Jack the guitar even though they haven't been on the best of terms. I'm hoping that will give Jack the realization that he wants to get back together with her, it's weird not seeing them together lol.
Excited for chapter 25!

-Kelsey =)

Aww that was kinda sad :(

You are just too sweet. Seriously. Is it sad that this update made my day?
Cuz it did!

I loved Jack's reaction. The hesitating, and running his fingers over the case first.
I bet he knew who it was from before he even opened it.
By the way, LOVED the first part, when they wake up on GC's bus! And the picture. I literally laughed out loud when you described it! Because I could TOTALLY see it (and it probably really DID happen....).
Anyway, I hope Jack's lightbulb in that big head of his comes on and he's like, "I LOVE this girl....wtf am I doing?!"

Thanks again for updating!
:D

I loved this chapter!
I really hope they both come to their senses soon.
And I really hope that Rachel gtfo. Chyeah.

Well I'm glad Jack didn't sleep with Rachel. Good for him. I think it's adorable that he was like "You're not Mallory!"

Can't wait for more!

I believe the readers above are correct about this story, it is very good and I love when I find it's updated. Did you hear about te San Antonio incident, I was actually going to go to six flags since I was visiting there and I read it on Twitter. I hope they don't hate Texas now

okay, this story is beyond amazing! i agree with the two commenters above me...this story is pure gold :]

psst.... get jack and mallory back togethers yea? :] <3

I agree with brianna7x. I get all excited 2 when this story is updated =) It is so good! You are an extremley talented writer. Are you thinking about becoming an author some day? You should definitly consider it =)

And i'm so glad Jack didn't have sex with the dumb blonde; however i think it was a bad decision on Jack's part to invite her back to the party. Go Alex for letting him know that! lol. And as brianna7x said, i think Mallory and Jack want to get back together as well, i want them 2 and hopefully they will soon! =)

YAY FOR JACK!
He was a good boy. He listened to the voice that was strangely speaking to him in his head.
I love how Mallory and the Madden twins seem like new best friends now, it's so cute. Lol.

:D

I still get extremely giddy when this story is updated.
It's weird. Anyway, this "Rachel", can go crawl in a hole. And die.
I think Mallory needs to do something; because even though they're not exactly on speaking terms anymore, they both want each other. I can tell. Haha.
Jack better not be stupid.

Oh, and, a Zack story.
:D

update plz!! love this story!

Anywho this story is getting good I thought it would suck with them not being together but it's turning out good. I think you should write a Zack story bc nobody ever writes Zack stories and he such a sweet guy.

Uh oh...I feel drama heating up with Rachel. lol. Chapter 22 was amazing, as always! Can't wait to see what happens next! And i love how Alex is being so nice to Mallory, unlike Jack who is sending mixed signals it seems. Anyways...it seems Zack is getting the most votes, however i would love for you to write an Alex story, cause he's my fav =) but either way it's going to be awesome!

-Kelsey
p.s. how do you like Don't Ever Lose Hope?

Dude of corse Zack!
he is a hottie with a body
and is in need of some lovin!