King of Empty Promises - Comments

I've lost count of how many times I've read this story. I love it <3

Aaaand I just read this again, for the third time. I fucking looove this story <3333

I'm rereading both because I love this so much (:

I reaaallllyy think you should do a sequel to this. Just for the fun of it (;
Oh and I'm not exaggerating when I say this is my favorite story on mibba (:

I can't believe I failed to comment this before !
This was the cutest story ever, and it was so well written and ahhh
the ending was so sweet :) It was a brilliant story line and stuff, between both of the stories and it showed their changing and growing and stuff and now they are most definitely together :):)
Maybe a a third part to this brilliant story in the future ?? haha but for now, I must go and read your brilliant Zack story :)
Never stop writing, your stories are amazing :):)

OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll be soooooo seriously depressed if u don't do a third one.
I loved the ending (Cough COUGH!!! (someone finally got laid) COUGH!)
And awwwwww, they're soooo flippin cute together! I don't know how they survived without each other (oh yeah, they kinda didn't. lol)
STANDING OVATION!
Great story!

ha I read both stories and loved them both!

I love how you made Jack an asshole XD

oh my god.
you couldn't have ended it better.
it's such a great story
i dont think i can read anything better.
minus your new zack one;
i love it.
i hope you keep up writing, you're really good <333

Nawww such a cute ending to a cute story! xD

Loved every second of it!

Can't wait to start reading that Zack story of yours...Which I will go do right now. :D

Keep up the amazing writing!

<3

I love how you ended this, with Jack still partly the same, but changed at the same time.
He's so cute with Mallory, they belong together <3
I'm really going to miss getting emails about this.

OH MY GOD this cant be happening you cant be ending the story it just cant be. lol this was a great story and most stories dont end like this and i liked it ending like this, because you can imagine youself what happens with those two lovers. cant wait to read about zack

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
I agree with theeternalbleeding; i'm gonna miss getting the emails saying this story was updated and smiling real big and mentally doing a happy dance!
:o
Alright, so this calls for ME actually WORKING on my STORY that I keep putting OFF because i'm LAZY and I can't stand the stuff I WRITE sometimes the day after I WRITE it.
Gah.

Rant over. But seriously. Loved loved loved loved that ending! It was so cute.
:]
The pineapple thing tripped me out.

D: wahhhhh D: ^ ^ "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (dramatic voice)"
it CAN'T BE OVER! fuck okay summer's gunna suck now
haha, i need a new story like this, perfect, funny, dramatic, heart warming, making me tear up T__________T damm u women for writing such an addicting and amazing story. . . but u did write it, so thats what counts :]

yay for jackary :] haha

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (dramatic voice) you can't do this to me! why? why? man i am gonna miss all the emails telling me about updates for this one. Are you planning on a career in the writing business if not you should definately consider it. I am so jealous of you, your stories are so much better than mine, grrrr. I love this story so much. I really wish it didn't have to end.

Oh my gosh it's over! I'm so sad and happy at the same time! Gah! This story was so amazing. Thank you for it. It was epic!

A fantastic ending to a fantastic story! Of course, i LOVED it. =) Even though it's the end, which i am sad about, i am very pleased that you made the decision to write another story! And will be looking forward to tmrw to read chapter 2...i bet it will be just as amazing as this story was!

I am very happy that Mallory decided to let Jack move in with her! I know the story ended, but i am still imagining about the things that could have happened if you continued. You deserve a round of applause...

"Opposites Attract- Well Maybe Not This Time" and "King of Empty Promises" is my favorite story on here! Congrats girl....and i've said this once, but i'm going to say it again, YOU are such a talented writer and i will always enjoy reading your stories! I am def letting all of my friends that love ATL know about this story b/c it is well worth the read..most definitley!

<3 Kelsey

ONE more?!
Oh noooooooo. Now what story update am I gonna get so excited about?!
Oh, right, the Zack story! Duh.

Anyway, SO sweet. I loved the fact that Jack was just sitting there in the dark. Kinda creepy, but nonetheless very surprising and eventually sweet ;]
Haha.
Now, let's hope they're smart enough to stay together!

BAWWWWWW :]
thats really all i have to say, nothing more, nothing less.

the whole chapter i was grinning ear to ear, it was SOOO cute :]

omg. I'm crying right now! How pathetic is that?! lol. Its, of course, tears of joy! I'm so freaking happy they are back together! I think the part that choked me up the most was when Jack was promising Mallory all of the things that he promised earlier but didn't keep..i could just picture it in my mind. I LOVED it and am going to be REALLY sad when this story is over...only 1 more chapter =( I always look forward to coming on mibba and reading this story and now it's about to be over =(

However, i am excited that you are writing the Zack story...i bet it will be just as amazing as this one! =) I loved the first chapter and can't wait to read more!!! =)
p.s. don't stop writing, your an incredible writer! what are you majoring in for college btw? just curious lol
<3 Kelsey

GAH! They're finally back together!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Oh goodness, you have no clue how happy I was to see the update. So great. But I'm so sad that it's almost done. This is terrible! lol Love it love it love it!