King of Empty Promises - Comments

We love you mucho too.. hehe.

Hahahaha now i'm anticipating the next chapter!
Interesting....with a wink? Oh man, can't be good.
;]

aww, i like this one. Jack and Mallory are uber-cute together :) cant wait for the next one!

i just read the prequel this morning and now im reading this, your stories are amazing and i cant wait till i get to see them when they come to houston! i cant wait for more

Ahh I didn't even realize there was a sequel!! But boy, am I glad I found it =]

I looove it. Sweet jack is so adorable I can't wait for the next chapter

Jack and Paul really do look similar at the moment! I think it's mostly the facial hair xD
I agree with theeternalbleeding with the whole jealousy thing, it kind of shows how much he cares about her, but it is slightly as if he doesn't fully trust her or something.
Sexually frustrated Jack is awesome, though I have a feeling that he could possibly end up cheating on her or something?
I loved the update and can't wait for more <3

I would love to see jack sexually frustrated... and i also like how jealous jack is showing himself to be because in a way it kind of shows that he really cares about mallory and doesnt want anyone else to have her but him but in a way it kind of shows a little bit of him not completely trusting mallory.

Awhhhhhhhh.
Sexual frustration! Go Mallory ;]
In a way, I kind of like how jealous Jack is showing himself to be, but it's also kind of weird.
:/

Haha loved the update!

Jack's a cute idiot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awwwwwwww! Great chapter!!!!!! Jack and Mallory are soooo cute! And his jealousy is kinda hot, he just needs to not take it over the edge!

update really soon!!!!!!!!!!! (Much Love!!!!!! <3)

Yesssss I was so excited when it was posted! Haha.
Such a cute chapter. I agree with randomshizzle; I love how the roles were reversed.
As nice as it was for Jack to promise her, I have a feeling he's not gonna stick to it (altho unintentionally). But oh well.
;]

This is actually a pretty cute chapter.
I love how you got that little flashback and how their roles are pretty much reversed... if that makes sense?
I really like how you've shown that it's hard for Jack to make that choice, it would have been easy for him to just say he'll stop, but the way you've written it is so much more realistic and interesting to read.

I can't wait for more <3

ok. last time i am trying. bracket i bracket at the beginning of the section. then bracket backslash i bracket at the end. hope that helps!

ok, it didn't work last time, but the italics things is

Awww sweetness! But Jack def needs to get his priorities straight. Alcohol or Mallory? Should be a no-brainer!! Anyways, good update!

Also, to do italics, it's just whatever you want in italics. and that should do it :)

AND I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE DVD AND FOR SILENT LIBRARY. oohhhkay. slight freak-out. sorry! hahaha

update soon! xx

I laughed so hard at brianna7x's last comment xD but I agree!

And of course Jack goes back to being an ass. But i kinda like his possessiveness. He just needs to stop being such a jerk!! LOVE THE STORY!!! UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEEASE???????????

Ugh... ourse he had to be a jealous prick and be a jerk about it.... why jack why? when poor mally is so great to you....

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Haha I KNEW it was coming! Of course. Jack and alcohol don't mix well. Then it becomes Jerk-face Jack :o

Oh noes. And I bet he's gonna wake up in the morning and be like "What are you talking about blah blah BLAH i'm an inconsiderate asshole blah blah blah". Just a guess ;]

Amazing update!
:D

uh oh Drama!!