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  • drea_uhoh

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    goddamm him! : [
    update soon! i really like this story, but i hate jack as much as I did when I was reading "Opposites Attract" please fix it haha :]
    May 13th, 2010 at 04:25am
  • paramore23

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    I love this!!!
    May 12th, 2010 at 07:36pm
  • Diamondintheroughxx

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    i loved the update. Jack was an ass though :(
    can't wait for more
    May 12th, 2010 at 11:02am
  • theeternalbleeding

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    thats fucked up that he did something like that one her birthday!!! anyways hhow were my homeboys 3oh!3?
    May 12th, 2010 at 08:43am
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    SNAP!!!! Oh my gosh... i can't believe jack did that.what a douche. Poor mally, but i'm glad she slapped him.
    May 12th, 2010 at 05:00am
  • brianna7x

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    Okay, I KNEW something like that was going to happen. It hit the fan, and it went OFF.
    Haha. Anyway....
    Asshole Jack is back and I kinda wanna kick his ass again. And again. It's her birthday, and of course he gets piss drunk kind of out of spite and does that....figures.
    BAD JACK, bad....

    Anyway, I smiled super big and said "Yayyy!" when I saw this was updated.
    Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiima loser
    0_o <3
    May 12th, 2010 at 04:37am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    Woow way to be an ass Jack!!
    Love this :)
    May 12th, 2010 at 04:17am
  • brianna7x

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    Haha this is probably my favorite chapter so far.
    <3

    Lol at Zack and Matt; Zack WOULD be the one to go lift her up with just one hand, haha.
    I have an idea what's going to happen, but i'll just zip my lips for now.
    :0
    May 7th, 2010 at 12:56am
  • randomshizzle

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    Aww this was so cute!
    I laughed pretty hard at her fighting to get away from Matt and Zack - I would probably do the same thing :)
    I love how jealous Jack isn't there (hopefully he'll stay away for her birthday), I love cute & adorable Jack <3
    May 6th, 2010 at 12:31pm
  • Tabatha_Cavaco

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    This is down right awesome!
    Updates Soon?
    (:
    May 6th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • randomshizzle

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    As much as I like Mallory, I feel sorry for Jack.
    He's so desperately frustrated!
    I can't wait to read more :)
    May 3rd, 2010 at 01:08pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    Haha, he is so frustrated. you definitely got that across. can't wait to see how this goes for him.
    May 3rd, 2010 at 03:04am
  • ImaginaryEnemy

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    haha love the song "Shots"
    totally had to listen to it while
    reading this ( :
    May 3rd, 2010 at 01:29am
  • brianna7x

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    Lalalalala LOVE this story
    :-)
    It seriously just gets better and better. I think this story is the story that makes me the most excited when I see it's updated, lol xD

    And damn Jack, cool it a little bit. Or....not. Whichever you prefer Mr. Barakat!
    :D
    May 2nd, 2010 at 11:49pm
  • unraveled.words

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    awesome as always. poor Jack, I do feel bad for him. And why wouldn't Mallory want to have sex with that man??? haha, jk, I know it's important for her to wait, but she better keep an eye on her man!

    xx
    May 2nd, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • TrInIgUrL

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    And jackass jack returns (insert echo here)!! then nice jack comes back out, which i think we prefer!!!!!!!!! nice chapters!!!!!!! i hyperventilated when i saw the update email. Lol.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 03:56am
  • unraveled.words

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    good chapter! Although Jack's panties get in a twist rather easily. Calm down boy, honestly..lol. I'm excited to see what he does for her birthday :)
    April 30th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    great chapter, love that they don't have a perfect relationship. it's more real.

    As for the DVD, i pre-ordered it three days ago!!! I'm so excited.

    Can't wait for more.
    April 30th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • brianna7x

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    I was mad at Jack at the first of the chapter....haha.
    But I loved it nonetheless :-]

    I need to pre-order the dvd. Can't decide which package I want though
    :o
    April 30th, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • randomshizzle

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    I pretty much died watching the DVD trailer, and I had to beg my mum to let me get it xD

    Anyway, I love the last line, it made me giggle.
    Jack and Mallory are so cute together, but Jack can be kind of scary when he suddenly gets angry/jealous.
    I can't wait for more :)
    April 30th, 2010 at 09:17pm