I am so hooked on this. Not surprising though, everything you write is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope he doesn't cheat on her.
This is so pretty already. I love the layout and the sweet little mood his letter seems to have to it. I especially love the way he seems to apologize to her every other paragraph. He must know her very well, huh? To be imagining someone you love and their reaction to what you write? :3 I dunno, I just think it's so cute. Your writing always is.
I think you are supposed to spell "staring" like "starring". Otherwise it just means someone is looking at you weird. xD And "messages" is "massages." Other than that, the first chapter was perfect. <3
Sort of "AWE HOW CUTE."
:)
I love those stories.
you're wonderful when it comes to messages.
massages.
“You're darling, Gaspard ...”
Your darling.
THIS IS JUST SO DARN ADORABLE, MAN.
It makes me feel really warm inside.
<3