The Introvert's Guide to World Domination - Comments

  • smileforthepaparazzi

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    Wow, I thought the second chapter would be in High School or something, so I was really surprised that it wasn't (although, that is a good thing).
    I like this A LOT and can't wait to see where you take this!
    April 17th, 2010 at 10:35pm
  • Nonsensical.

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    I didn't read the original version of this, but this rewrite is honestly very, very good. The dedication at the beginning was a very nice touch to interest readers as well, because I'm sure almost every girl has at one point liked a guy who didn't know she existed.

    The first part was very adorable. You made Rian completely endearing despite his choice of words (impressive for a third grader), and also, I think that the way you wrote it kind of made the readers feel a little protective of Tania.

    Also, I was very impressed with the second part because I thought that the story would be taking place in like high school, senior year or something. But it was very original to instead make it take place out of school and give a character a career in politics. I'm eager to see where this goes.
    April 17th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • leaveyouhigh

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    I love the new idea(:
    and I know how it feels to like someone without them knowing who you are, its not fun.
    anyway, update soon on this awesome re-write please.
    April 17th, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • smileforthepaparazzi

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    Awesome re-write :)
    April 17th, 2010 at 05:48pm
  • musicxloverx2

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    I loved it all :) sooooo subscribing!
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:38pm
  • I.want.2.be.Immortal

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    love the dedication, im deffinately reading this
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:30pm
  • Noemilovee

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    This story rocks my socks!(= ilove the dedication alsoo! :D Im subbingg.
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:24pm
  • midsummer rhapsody

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    This is the epitome of good fiction! It's a petit chef d'oeuvre! (little mastepiece)
    April 17th, 2010 at 04:14pm
  • Blue Dreams

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    I can't wait for more!!
    April 17th, 2010 at 10:59am
  • gildedtales

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    Two thumbs up. This is awesome.
    World domination, a former dream of mine.
    :)
    April 14th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • leaveyouhigh

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    I love this story
    its really amazing.
    update soon?
    April 13th, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • Free The Mascot

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    I cannot wait for the next update - I love it :) So curious as to what will come next!
    April 13th, 2010 at 04:19pm
  • The Violet Writer

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    I do take your invitation to dance, and agree that the divider was one of the cutest pixilated images I have seen in a while. Liked the chapter even though it was short, and can't wait for more!
    April 13th, 2010 at 05:13am
  • veganbabe

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    i really lik the way this story is comin out... nd yes i loved the divider =D

    ♥ KEEP WRITTING ♥
    April 13th, 2010 at 03:48am
  • overlypredictable

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    hahaha, I'm in chemistry reading this, and i can honestly say two things; 1)Detention here i come, and 2)oh god i love this!!!!!!!!!
    April 12th, 2010 at 02:04pm
  • veganbabe

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    so far im lovin ur story..... please update soon

    i already subscribed :D
    April 12th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • astontheowl

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    Loads of love for your style. Subscribed and really impatient for more :)
    April 12th, 2010 at 02:26am
  • bowl of oranges

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    Ohhhh, I like. :) Subscribingggg!
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • overlypredictable

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    this is really something. I like it a lot, and i hope tha tyou continue this for a long time to come. Gosh, this is better than microwave pizza! And that is saying something
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:32am
  • Quirky

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    Cute. ^_^
    I do wonder where this is all headed...
    April 12th, 2010 at 01:09am