The Introvert's Guide to World Domination - Comments

So I read this years ago when you were still updating and I was checking this website everyday for the next chapter. I've been thinking about it a lot lately and I'm so glad it's still here. Hopefully you'll consider revisiting this and maybe publishing.

I can't wait to read this!!! Ahhhh so excited AND it's finished!!!! major giant plus <3 Ugh even the banner is gorgeous. You have my undivided attention.

This is perhaps one of the best original fiction pieces I have come across on a website like this. It was a delight to read and I think it deserves more readers! I love how everything comes full circle in the end. The main characters are people you can relate to as well as get very frustrated at for many different reasons.

It has great character development through out and a plot that is actually going somewhere instead of just standing still like a lot of stories tend to do. At the same time it doesn't go too fast like I can tend to do with my work.

This really was a very good read and I would definitely come back to it in the future.

I found this story, yesterday, through a blog who listed this story as a favorite. I read the entire thing because I was completely captivated by the very first sentence, and I couldn't stop reading. I loved it from start to finish, although I was VERY VERY VERY DEVESTATED by Cypher's fate. He was my absolute favorite character throughout the story. It sucks that you made him so likeable. I shipped Laura and Cypher with all of my heart. </3

I also loved how you set it up with the playground scene foreshadowing all that would happen later on in life. So cool. And I love how she fell in love with who she least expected to love. Beautiful.

But anyway, BEAUTIFUL story. I'll probably read it again in the future. lol

This is an incredible story. It's so ORIGINAL and absolutely creative and beautiful and I just want to keep reading and never ever stop, and I only just started but I saw this on many a rec list and the title caught my eye because...well...I am an introvert who needs a guide to world domination. But also because the first chapter made me fall in love. It captivated me, and I kept reading, and the love has not faded. My love for this story is eternal, and I'm not even on chapter 5 yet. You're talented and this is incredible and just...wow.

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Thank you so much for the sweet comment!!! :D

I absolutely adore this story and the characters you have created. I think the difference with your writing is that you have a lot of courage. You have what only a few writers have and that is the pure ability to create your own world and drag your readers into it too. This story was very honest and raw and I enjoyed it very much, and I'm also sad that I've finished reading it as I'll miss the Resistance and Valin. Amazing story, I will certainly re-read this in the future and recommend it to anyone looking for unique, well written original fiction. I would love to see this become a novel, but I guess that's wishful thinking? You certainly have the talent for it. I am now off to read another of your stories. Keep writing, you are exceptionally good at it.

I think I'm just about in love with this story.

I am so happy I was finally able to read this story. I like the end. My word, all that chaos is frightening. It's Obvious Cillian Rogers killed his heart. He shot his own son, st point blank range! I'm glad someone killed him- with a bullet to his head.

I'm going to check out your other stories now.

Peace. See you on the other side in the comments section of your stories.

LOVED IT!! It was brilliant and so well written!! I love your stories! You are a very talented writer :D

Hats off to you, my lady.
Honestly, in the beginning I wanted Rian and Tania to be together. But seeing it all over now, I think that if those two were together the story would be less realistic. Like Tania said, she admired him but she never knew him. And throughout the story, they didn't really have the change to fall in love with each other, unlike how it happened with Valin.
This ending kind of showed us that love doesn't always happen with the people you plan to be with (like Rian), but with the people you least expect it with.

Okay, enough from my deeeeeeeeeeep philosophy, I'm giving myself a headache :P. What I really wanted to say was CONGRATS! on finishing your first mibba story and hopefully you'll continue writing because it's what you're good at.

A smart ending to an incredibly smartly written story. (that makes sense, right?) :D

I don`t even have the words to describe how amazing your story is. It was completely unexpected and kept me wanting more. Now I`m left with a bittersweet feeling that it`s ended. I loved the story but now I have to find something else that`s amazing to read. Your story brought me onto the site that is Mibba and now I`m excited to see what else is on this site.

Me again. Haha, this is getting embarassing, but I just had to Congratulate you on finishing an awesome story! It may not be the way you wanted it to end, but sometimes things take form on their own, I think it's wonderful that you let us imagine what's next for the people of the Resistance.

I also had to respond to your A/N, I do think Tania and Rian makes more sense together, but life doesn't make sense and I guess she seems to know what she's doing. It's a path not taken. SO, kudos. So, uhm... I think that's it. All the luck to future stories! Can't wait to read 'em. ;)

:claps: Congrats on finishing this! It's so exhausting to write an entire story, so I give you mad props for sticking through it and finishing. :)

As for the ending...it seemed fitting for me. I sort of imagined all throughout the story that she could have ended up with either Rian or Valin, and I think it would have worked either way. As it is, it's satisfying.

I'm sad that it's ended, but I'm pretty damn excited for the epilogue .

Ahhh Cypher! Sad face! This chapter worked fine for me. I don't think it needed heavier weaponry...tanks are pretty intense as is. Can't wait for the epilogue! Can't believe it's ending!! O.O

Best Birthday present ever! Thank you for the amazing update! I made every one shut up just so I could read this! :p

AHHH LOVE!! I'm super super excited (and scared) to read the next chapter..... Love it <3

Hurricane by 30 Seconds to Mars seems to be the song for this chapter...I can just imagine the song playing in Rian's mind.

WAHHH. How dare you not update in 8 months?! Haha, kidding. You can't rush art. I must say though, I'm kind of sad that it's going to end soon, I've grown attached to Rian and Valin. That being said, I'm sort of excited to see how it ends. Nice forshadowing at the end, I think I have an idea of what's going to happen. We'll just have to see. ;) Hahaha, love this story to death. Ugh. Enough. Adieu. Excited to see the next masterpiece you pull out of that beautiful mind of yours. Haha. :D