this really is an awesome story and it's beautifully written. I totally get where you're coming from with the comments and everything. I hope that you continue with the story. it is one of my absolute favorites on mibba. I love how even though the characters change a little bit, they still ring true to themselves. like I said, this is a beautiful story and I hope it continues :)
I hope she lets him...but he'd find a way regardless of what she said. Rain and Nate need each other too much. The babies need them too much. Please don't make them stay apart. I loved this chapter. I loved how far Nate has come. Brilliant writer, you are!
I'm a pathetic mess. He's so cute. Oh my goodness. It's so amazing to see how far Nate has come since the beginning of his story. He deserves that happiness and he's right; he deserves a shot at a life with the people that love him and show it. His mom had her chance, and she messed up, but that doesn't mean that she can't do the one thing that would mean the most to Nate.
I really hope his mom just let's him go easily. If she really wants to connect or whatever she was wanting, let him go with Rain to England. That'd be the best thing. Great update as usual
When I read this I couldn't help but feel every emotion Rain felt even though my favorite character is Nate :) this story is so good! And when your such a good writer there os no room for modesty keep t up and update soon.
this was so beautifully written!. like all of your chapters. I'm sad about this story ending, I really am. but I'm also looking forward to the sequel and how both of them will cope away from each other. In particular Nate.
So... yeah, that was beautiful. They always have their little tiffs and they still manage to make it through, even when it gets really hard. Long distance is hard... but if there's someone who can do it, I'm pretty sure it's them. <3