NEW READER HERE! so I started reading your story about 2 days ago (yes that is how long it took me to read this) and I loved it instantly. I have to admit that my favourite is Rain because he's so adorable but I think he tends to blow things out of proportion sometimes. Nate is protective but he's really sweet. They're both great in their own little ways and I utterly hate it when they fight D; It sucks that you've had all this shizz happen to you. But hey, that's the price you pay for being an awesome writer. I honestly love the way you write lol Update soon, please, I'm hooked on this <3
Hi! I've been a silent reader here for a while but I think it's finally time I told you I loooove your story. You're an amazing writer and please please please keep it up :)
Btw Rain is totally misunderstanding:( poor boys!
It's awful btw that someone would report you:( I was reported for not using my real name in my profile, people are stupid and petty, just ignore their stupidity and carry in with what you do best knowing you have loving devoted readers :)
Dammit :/ No sequel? Fucking aye. Lame ass people always ruining good things. I mean, I don't like the kid plot to all this. But that's cause I'm selfish and hate children x) I wish there would be more :/
I think I can't pick aside like everyone above. I think I love them both and they both have their flaws. I think they were both wrong. Nate was wrong for comparing him to Mark. Rain was wrong for overreacting. Now they need to just kiss and make the fuck up. :) Great chapter.
I understand a little bit of Nate's thinking but Rain's right. He's leaving something with Nate, more than just his love, Nate should be able to at least give him this; even though it's going to hurt. He's not Mark; Mark was a jerk. Rain cares for him and loves him so much.
I hope that they work this out. They're too cute not to.
I think Rain overreacted just a little. I mean jeez. Nate wasn't ready for that. He's scared. He's not fuckin compairing Rain to Mark. He's just rememberin what happened. I think Rain needs to fuckin chill. I mean jeez. Poor Nate. I feel bad for him. Rain doesn't understand cuz it didn't happen to him.
okay, here i go. another awfully long comment for you to read. but it's full of love, so it's worth it, yes? yes.
i have also had problems with school work taking up my time, like basically everyone else who goes to school and tries their best. apparently this person who reported you does not go to school, or is a slacker. i'm not hatin', i'm just sayin'. and, if you don't feel like updating, then don't update. i can't speak for everyone, but i personally would rather wait three weeks for an awesome chapter than just have you spit out nonsense every other day.
take your time, love. take a break. step away from mibba and all the other stuff and take some time to breathe. i understand that school comes first, and i respect that.
so do whatever you want to do. you can write the sequel, or not. you can stop this story in three chapters, or not. find whatever you feel is right for this story, as the author. and do it.
i know that that's basically what everyone else said, but whatevs.
now, on to the chapter: hot showers make me smile, and i believe Nate when he says that everything is going to work out for them in the end.
I think that it's absolutely insane that people hound you for updates.
School comes first. I mean, reading your stories makes me happy, something that's difficult to achieve these days, but fuck, it's your future we're talking about here. Besides, maybe people need to realize that it takes TIME to update these things. If you did them all in ten minutes, they wouldn't be as brilliant.
I don't think it should be a chore to update though. Write because it makes you happy, not because you have anons stalking you on tumblr. People are assholes, but it is kind of their ass backward way of telling you they like your writing. People are just greedy is all.
I really hope you do the sequel though. It would be great to check my email and see updates for things you've written. You're easily one of the best authors on the site, in my mind, anyway. I don't know how to convince you to do the sequel. I mean, I really want it, but if you feel stressed out because of this, I don't want to be anywhere near the cause of someone else's stress.
I love this story. I love all your stories. I love your writing. Don't ever stop because of something so stupid as people. <3
I've had the same problems with work and school too. Just take a deep breath and remember, no matter how much they pester you and beg for more updates, you have creative power. Let them wait. If they unsubscribe or just stop reading, they weren't good enough to read your stuff. You're an excellent writer and I know you like to address all your readers, but the ones that pester you and hunt you down on other sites are the ones to be ignored.
I hope that helped. Just stay calm this story will get finished whether you post the rest all in a week or in a year. ^_^
I actually got sad when I read your A/N, now. I feel really sorry for you, and I understand that you don't want and don't have any motivation for the sequel (and this?). And those who stalk you as anons on tumblr.. srsly wtf D: Maybe you should put this on a hold, and get done with things at school and such before you continue? Maybe a break would do you good! :]
Btw, I really liked this chapter. It's.. yeah, really, really good. :3