I don't know whether to be excited for the ending or to be sad that it's coming. [no pun intended] this story is A+ my dearie I really lk the way you wrote this last chapter. It made me smile. :}
asdfghjkl; smut AND cuteness at the end?! Christmas has come early :D This was so great, loved the way he said Jay and how they held hands! I agree with what the person above says about how their love and care for each other is shown. Alex's nervousness before made it more realistic I think because I wouldn't have imagine him to be like 'I can't ever remember having sex but RAVISH ME NOW!' kinda thing, if that makes sense? So yeah, ya did good hun :)
Ahh it's so sad it's nearly ending! I guess everything's worked out for them now though..... still, *sob*!
That was perfect, seriously, their love and care for each other was really shown throughout the whole chapter, and the sex scene was just amazing and perfect.If I didn't already know, I wouldn't have thought this was your first sex scene, I loved all the little details, like how they were holding hands towards the end, that was so cute and just perfect for them. And the end of the chapter! With Alex calling Jack 'Jay' and then saying that he'd never forget him, it's just so freakin' cute and adorable and I really love this.
Awww. Perfect. Absoluetly perfect. I loved it. It was good. :( Coming to an end? I'm depressed about that. I really am. I don't wanna see this story end. But I guess it has too at some point no matter how sad it makes me
Even though I did think they had sex on the bus, and I'm disappointed they didn't, I'm happy they got their alone time in there somewhere (; love how Jack's all, 'I don't care and I'm comfortable' and shit. Haha. Poor Lex. He needs to chill a little. Can't wait for the rest of this! :D
Hey guys thanks for all the comments :) I just want to give you the heads up that the guys DIDN'T have sex on the bus, they just had some alone time together. But do not fret the sex will happen in the near future as it's going to be a lot more detailed then the scene included in this chapter. If anyone of you are uncomfortable with it I'll tell you when it's coming up. It should be in around 2 chapters time. Sorry for the confusion xXx
So they did it? On the bus? Dayyuumm. :) Lucky bitch. You got to go to the show. /: bet it super amazing! Haha. Papa Gaskarth. Wow. Love the picture. That's Jack for ya.
Ghehe, this made memories from last wednesday come back x] I was at a ATL show (w00tw00t! YAY! =D) and after the show there was a small signing sessions thingy. First Jack and Rian came out, and when Jack went back Alex came out the venue. But when they passed eachother Jack grabbed alex crotch rather casually xD It was a very funny and sexy sight ^^