I was very pleased with the way this new chapter turned out. Though it was short, you managed to fill it with emotion. It allowed us readers a closer look into Miseria's heart. With the sudden input of her father, readers were brought to the same halt that Miseria was. (though not quite the same degree of physiological impact.) Perhaps she is breaking back into the light. Maybe she needs music and Gerard to guide her. I hope to find out soon.
You may want to try backing off of hysterical crying. Yes, when you are sad you cry alot... But, when a person is depressed, it is more of an emptyness of feeling. Though the person may still cry, it is a silent, broken thing. They are unable to connect with the hurt or loss. Just so you can think about it. Keep on rockin', girly. You're comin' on fine!
There. I subscribed. Now you have to update. You don't get a choice. Go sit and start writing. I demand a chapter by Saturday. That'll give you plenty of time aaaaaaand a deadline.