okay, so I just finished reading everything of this story so far (being sick has some benefits hehe). Anyway, I FREAKING LOVE IT. I love the plot line so far, and I have a feeling it's going to get interesting. ;) update soooooon :D
ps. i really do hate vic, she needs to go away. like now.
well to be honest, its not your best work. all you did was copied the song lyrics in and added some squeals and stuff, thats good too, but there werent much story there, BUT, YAY NICK!