Hey there. It says this story is an original fiction but you have Nicholas Jonas in it. That means it's a fan fiction because you don't own a real person, or a famous one at that. :3 So, I'd highly suggest you change that error before a not-so-nice-person-like-me reports you for such a stupid, easily-fixed reason. :)
LOVE it! Gosh, 4 stories at once? I don't even think I can handle three, and I think I may drop one.. Maybe two. haha. And I absolutely adore the first person POV, it's great! I personally think it gives more description, but that's just me. I'm in love with this! And I already hate Victoria ;]