nicely done with the sex! for someone who doesn't do much, it wasn't bad at all. it was very real and it felt kind of like i was watching them...creeped me out a bit, but it was great!
that was a very very sweet chapter, but it was kind of um...boring, but sweet non the less. Now when i say boring i don't me the whole thing, just when he was going on about how he fell for her, it was all so not new or creative. You've done such a great job with this story i was kind of thinking that you would blow me out of the water...but you did come close with the waiter, i thought ville was going to hit him
:D very brilliant i even read this on my phone at school i thought they where gonna erm you no in this chapter i guess not though. ooh i have a story i just started the first chapter its kinds short because e.o i like to leave cliff hangers and i ran out of ideas its a bam margera romance ;P it would mean so much if you read it its ok if you dint wanna your probley busy with other things
so she looks so good!!! i'm kind of shocked that ville didn't drool over her lol. i know that this date will go great...but it may not, i'm just saying that phone call could be bad