It's All Tears - Comments

I love this story! Please update soon!

with all this drinking she may kill herself and that would be bad very bad! cause then ville would feel like shit and he would or could hurt himself and we don't want that...no no no! we want and by we i mean I want her to get better with kat and stop all this drinking...it's doing nothing but making her the living dead.

She needs to stop being depressed! :( And she needs to eat more! Sheesh...

okay so i'm finally done and just read the last update...i'm very sad that he is leaving i have a bad feeling that she will do something bad without him by her

Thank you all so much for the comments. I really appreciate that you took the time to comment and it means a lot to me to know what you all think. (:

I really like it =] keep writingggggg

love it =)

Awwh noo villes gone :( I want roisin to visit him so they can hook up
;) well I hope this comment gets you closer to the next update x

Aww, it's so sad he has to leave :(

So, second comment if I'm correct?

You are an amazing writer, I see nothing to criticize.
And I just noticed I was the first comment yay!
Update soon, I'm going to go subscribe now =)

okay i'm only is 12, but i have to comment...i love this! i feel bad at how she thinks of herself when really she is like very pretty! i'm glad that ville is by her side and that they kissed

Thank you for comments again, lovely peoples! :D

i luv it totally continue it

Well this is a different twist in a Ville/Bam story. I like it :)

Smexy.

awe such a cute update!

Thank you to all of you that have given me feedback. It is much appreciated. xD

Great update <3

This is interesting. You have a talent for playing out moments of intense interaction which works really well. I did notice occasional confusion with tenses and emphatic phrases in capitals instead of italics, but they were all minor grammatical points. As a pointer for the story in general, I was a bit surprised when she spoke- was it Gaelic?! That was rather unexpected, especially because I thought it was lesser-used than even Welsh! Anyway. I did really like it and hope you keep it up. I find Ville is always a good source of inspiration <3

She's going to get alcohol poisoning