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I like thissssssssss.

Ohh, I like this.
The chapters are very short and to the point but you can still get a sense of each character's personality.

Subscribed. :D Or was this the end? :/

The plot is simple. The story, however, is not. You've done it once again! You are such a poet and a creative one at that. This story is brilliant, the way you construe this. It's beautiful and catching and great. I admit, I don't like it as much as Tunnel Vision, but it's right up with it. Amazing.

NONONONOFREDRICKNONONO

NONONONONONO

NONONONO

BRITTANY REALLY ? FREDRICK ?

but this is getting so go.
in a moment, everything can change.

the shortness of these just add to it.
i really enjoy this, you are a magnificent writer.
i feel like i'm really connecting with your characters (:

i love the repetition with this, it makes this so much more unique.
i think i've fallen in love a little bit with each of your characters.

they seem to each have their own different personalities,
i just love each of them.

Then, when she falls asleep I crawl out the window and start towards Flemings.

And then he ran away like I wish I could.

i have a thing for last lines if you haven't noticed (:
but damn gurl, this stuff is too good. i feel connected to this already.
and i really really want to know what happened to andrea's dad. and everyone else haha.
this is lovely, you are such an amazing writer.

how can this not have more comments !
omg this it too good. like i love how there are many characters with their own stories.
and for danielle's i love the last line. perfect.

okokok imma go read the next part then comment again ((:

uh oh. i have a feelin' i know what's gonna happennnn. but i'm probably wrong (:
and i like how vague this is too. you write just enough to keep us wanting more and curious.
and phil holding christine's hair, that was so sweet. and nick saying how he laughed at her puking.

i really really really really really like these characters. i feel like i know them.

okay, this is a brill start. i love how short and poetic it feels.
fantastic job, i'm excited to see where you take this.