Foul Punch - Comments

This was one of my favourite stories, I read it back on that awful quiz site lol. I hope one day this will be continued but I recall that it was said it wouldnt =\ anyways hope you are well!

oops ... somehow it sent the comment before I was finished... as I was saying, you are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Just one suggestion as to maybe add a bit more dialogue to it but overall, great job and keep up the good work :) I'll definitely be on the look out for an update. Hopefully that is soon.

You are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Great job and keep up the good work :)

You are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Great job and keep up the good work :)

I LOVE THIS STORY!! I JUST WANT TO KEEP READING! When is your next chapter? Tell me! Tell me! Tell me! Hehe. Everything about this is what I'm into, so please, don't take long with the next chapter. I love your work, keep it up!! :D I'm totally subscribing for this son of a gun.

Hello, Unfortunately I could not read the whole thing because I had to go catch a flight. However, you are a really talented writer. The description and the flow of the writing was beautifully done. The plot was interesting, and your grammar and spelling were flawless. Even the layout was really eye catching and beautiful. I love how you name each chapter after a quote from a book. The one thing that I could say, was it was a bit confusing. At times I couldn't tell who was narrating the story and what gender they were. Other than that, great job. Keep writing!

well I can't wait for the update.. I know its been a while... but yeah..just tell me when you going to update

I really like the format and the story. I get a bit disinterested when there's too much showing. I would suggest expressing some of what is simply explained to the reader in these lengthy paragraphs and turn it into a scene with mostly dialogue and action. This gives the reader a chance to experience the story with you.

oh yeah!!!!!

more soon please :)

YOU'RE BAAAAACK! (:
unph Romeo you dreamboat!

YOU'RE BAAAAACK! (:
unph Romeo you dreamboat!

Love this!

I really like how the summary explains everything so well. This definitely caught my attention. The layout is really pretty, especially the background. Great job on this story, I hope to see it updated soon!

YAYAYAY. THIS STORY IS BACK. wee. ♡

Pleaseeeeeee tell me you are updating the next chapter like right now! I can't wait to read moreeeeee, pleaseee!!! xoxo.

Romeo has such a complicated background that its cool! :D I can't wait to see how this story is all going to go.

wow, I am liking it...

ugh love Romeo to pieces
STILL
he's just so mysterious and conflicted ;)))))))
please update soon!

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Well, it looks like you just gained a new reader. First off, let me say how flawless this is written! You seem to have your stuff together. I already love Annette's character, and how she's fangirling over Dorian. Tis adorable! I was kind of hoping she'd get back in her car and run over the knife-man junkie and end him. Oh well, maybe later on!

Subscribing and recommending. I can't wait for more! :3