This was one of my favourite stories, I read it back on that awful quiz site lol. I hope one day this will be continued but I recall that it was said it wouldnt =\ anyways hope you are well!
November 22nd, 2015 at 01:12am
Foul Punch - Comments
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oops ... somehow it sent the comment before I was finished... as I was saying, you are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Just one suggestion as to maybe add a bit more dialogue to it but overall, great job and keep up the good work :) I'll definitely be on the look out for an update. Hopefully that is soon.April 27th, 2015 at 04:58am
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You are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Great job and keep up the good work :)April 27th, 2015 at 04:52am
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You are a super talented writer :) The writing had a beautiful flow to it. The format was amazing. Great job and keep up the good work :)April 27th, 2015 at 04:52am
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I LOVE THIS STORY!! I JUST WANT TO KEEP READING! When is your next chapter? Tell me! Tell me! Tell me! Hehe. Everything about this is what I'm into, so please, don't take long with the next chapter. I love your work, keep it up!! :D I'm totally subscribing for this son of a gun.December 24th, 2013 at 10:46am
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Hello, Unfortunately I could not read the whole thing because I had to go catch a flight. However, you are a really talented writer. The description and the flow of the writing was beautifully done. The plot was interesting, and your grammar and spelling were flawless. Even the layout was really eye catching and beautiful. I love how you name each chapter after a quote from a book. The one thing that I could say, was it was a bit confusing. At times I couldn't tell who was narrating the story and what gender they were. Other than that, great job. Keep writing!November 29th, 2013 at 05:15pm
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well I can't wait for the update.. I know its been a while... but yeah..just tell me when you going to updateOctober 17th, 2013 at 09:25pm
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I really like the format and the story. I get a bit disinterested when there's too much showing. I would suggest expressing some of what is simply explained to the reader in these lengthy paragraphs and turn it into a scene with mostly dialogue and action. This gives the reader a chance to experience the story with you.October 11th, 2013 at 01:41am
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oh yeah!!!!!June 1st, 2013 at 04:19pm
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more soon please :)May 13th, 2013 at 12:42pm
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YOU'RE BAAAAACK! (:
unph Romeo you dreamboat!May 13th, 2013 at 05:43am -
YOU'RE BAAAAACK! (:
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Love this!April 30th, 2013 at 04:17pm
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I really like how the summary explains everything so well. This definitely caught my attention. The layout is really pretty, especially the background. Great job on this story, I hope to see it updated soon!April 26th, 2013 at 12:57am
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YAYAYAY. THIS STORY IS BACK. wee. ♡April 14th, 2013 at 01:07pm
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Pleaseeeeeee tell me you are updating the next chapter like right now! I can't wait to read moreeeeee, pleaseee!!! xoxo.April 1st, 2013 at 06:15pm
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Romeo has such a complicated background that its cool! :D I can't wait to see how this story is all going to go.March 23rd, 2013 at 03:58pm
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wow, I am liking it...March 23rd, 2013 at 03:48pm
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ugh love Romeo to pieces
STILL
he's just so mysterious and conflicted ;)))))))
please update soon!March 23rd, 2013 at 07:57am -
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Well, it looks like you just gained a new reader. First off, let me say how flawless this is written! You seem to have your stuff together. I already love Annette's character, and how she's fangirling over Dorian. Tis adorable! I was kind of hoping she'd get back in her car and run over the knife-man junkie and end him. Oh well, maybe later on!
Subscribing and recommending. I can't wait for more! :3March 21st, 2013 at 10:23am
