This is a great story please do mopre can't wait to read more!!!!! Send a comment when you have done mroe on my profile !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story :)
I liked this. I can honestly say that it was a nice, simple and cute read to get the stress out of my mind.
The only problem for me was Symmery. I found her to be a tad bit Mary Sue-ish. Not that much, but there's this thing about her that bothers me. I think if you create a sequel, you could possibly expand on her character. That's all I have against you story because you stated that it should be a simple story. But characters are a big thing for me.
There must be a sequel, and that last chapter was so sweet. OMG, I was like: DON'T KILL SKY! And then it turns out he is alive :L I can't believe he gave her the bracelet This is amazing, I love it :)
TEAM SKY & SYMMERY!
There may be no point doing that^^ anymore, but I still want to because my chanting paid off :)
Just found and read this entire story and I freaken loved it!!!! Kinda irked how she forgave him sooooo easily after all he did but whatever can't change it now I kinda see why people say female protagonists are annoying cause she kinda was… but anyways I loved loved loved the story ( other than her easy forgiveness. ;) ) it was so cutely cheesy!! I cant wait til the sequel comes out!
thank youuu everyone. :3 yah, i've been thinking about that :] lol but i have no idea what to write yet XD lol okay, i'll inform you guys when i came up with onee :] thanks again *mwah* (:<3
At least do an epilogue for now! Then maybe a sequal in the future? :D I loved this story, cliche in some ways but you wrote it in such a great way it wasn't a bad cliche. Well done!