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  • paper airplanes.

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    This was, and still is my favorite story. I constantly read it because it brings back so much memories of mine. Fantastic. Just perfect.
    July 4th, 2012 at 10:34pm
  • Fall in2 the Silence

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    I forgot to say that I love it!
    August 15th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • Fall in2 the Silence

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    NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! That can't be the end!!!!!
    Does he follow her? What happens next? Sequel?
    August 15th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • mercury.

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    thanks everoneeeeeee ! :]
    yah ok, sure thing, i'll just inform you guys if i decided to make the sequel.
    thanks again for reading x]
    July 30th, 2010 at 09:31am
  • Emotion

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    This is a great story please do mopre can't wait to read more!!!!!
    Send a comment when you have done mroe on my profile
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    great story :)
    July 25th, 2010 at 11:13am
  • SwaySwayBayBay.

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    Never. End. The. Story.
    -Glare-
    xD
    Sequel? Please? (:
    July 18th, 2010 at 09:13am
  • Hope.

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    THE END MADE MEEE SOOOOO HAPPPPPPY :)
    I ALMOST CRIED
    pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase make a sequel :)
    i will cry if you don't :(:)
    June 26th, 2010 at 06:01pm
  • biseuteu.

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    I liked this. I can honestly say that it was a nice, simple and cute read to get the stress out of my mind.

    The only problem for me was Symmery. I found her to be a tad bit Mary Sue-ish. Not that much, but there's this thing about her that bothers me. I think if you create a sequel, you could possibly expand on her character. That's all I have against you story because you stated that it should be a simple story. But characters are a big thing for me.
    June 19th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • sharpbutterfly

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    I loved it. Please write a sequel
    June 15th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • kaul hilo

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    There must be a sequel,
    and that last chapter was so sweet.
    OMG, I was like: DON'T KILL SKY!
    And then it turns out he is alive :L
    I can't believe he gave her the bracelet
    This is amazing, I love it :)

    TEAM SKY & SYMMERY!

    There may be no point doing that^^ anymore, but I still want to because my chanting paid off :)

    SEQUEL!!
    June 15th, 2010 at 06:12pm
  • Jack-jack123

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    i love this story!! its soo cute and amazing!
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • Crazy_Peep

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    I hope you write a sequel and post it soon! I don't think you should change the epilogue! xD
    June 15th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • HisPoohObessedGirl

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    HOLY FREAKING CHEZ U HAVE TO PUT UUP THE SEQUEL LOL LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!
    June 14th, 2010 at 08:55pm
  • iseepurplepeople

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    Just found and read this entire story
    and I freaken loved it!!!!
    Kinda irked how she forgave him sooooo easily after all he did
    but whatever
    can't change it now
    I kinda see why people say female protagonists are annoying
    cause she kinda was…
    but anyways I loved loved loved the story ( other than her easy forgiveness. ;) )
    it was so cutely cheesy!!
    I cant wait til the sequel comes out!
    June 14th, 2010 at 08:33pm
  • How He Loves

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    awwww!!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!!! Awesomeness!!!!! You're a great writer... I'm almost sad to see this story go.... =)
    June 14th, 2010 at 04:42pm
  • mercury.

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    thank youuu everyone. :3
    yah, i've been thinking about that :]
    lol but i have no idea what to write yet XD
    lol okay, i'll inform you guys when i came up with onee :]
    thanks again *mwah* (:<3
    June 12th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • MemoriesdonoJustice

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    At least do an epilogue for now!
    Then maybe a sequal in the future? :D
    I loved this story, cliche in some ways but you wrote it in such a great way it wasn't a bad cliche.
    Well done!
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:23pm
  • Classy Not Classic

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    No, not finished. SEQUAL. :)
    June 8th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • Cynical.

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    Wow you have a lot of comments on this story.
    Anyways this is really godo even though I'm only on the first chapater.
    =D
    June 4th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • Jupiter's Census.

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    You should put up an epilogue :D Tell us what came of Sky and Symmery.

    OR! You should make a sequel.
    June 3rd, 2010 at 01:36am