Who We'll Be - Comments

Ah! I love this story! It's better then the ones where it just talks about how two people love each other and no real conflict really happens (it's nice and all, those stories, but it doesn't grab much attention.) Your story, however, has the conflicts, the fights, the ups and downs and it's almost perfect! (Sorry, I don't think there is a pure perfection, but yours is close enough!) I seriously say I loved it and I quiet enjoyed this love story. I give you 5 out of 5 stars! ***** Cause I can rate like that. Lol.

it needs a squeckal please

hey, this was great (:
it was so cute xD
it'd be great if you wrote a sequel ;)
but if not, thats fine (:

cutecutecutecutecute!!!!XDXD

please write a sequal!!!!!! this is such a cute story!!!!

doesn't matter at this point if you continue or not
but if that was the ending I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!

great story!!!!!

awww meaning, hes leaving jersey with her?

Keep going =]

OMG!!!!marian keep going....i love the ending...it is so cute....XD

i loved the ending, i think you have ended it perfectly, there is no need to change it at all.

awww.... that was cute but I don't know if I want it to be the end...

That was a great ending.
A sequel might be good too, though. (:

Sequel!!!!

I think its a nice way to end the story. However, I would love to read more!!

This absolutely cannot end now! Write more (:

If you end it now i will die...please dont end it?

AMAZING! THIS CAN NOT END!!!!!! THEY NEED TO BE GF AND BF AGAIN, and umm.....idk....have fun together,lol :)

Omg keep going!!!! I lov it.

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That is the best ending I have ever read in any story in the universe
It's perfect... BUT...

SEQUEL!!!! <--- I demand it. :)

SKY & SYMMERY <--- My hard work paid off huh? :)

I would be fine if you left the story end there but i would love to read more!