21 Steps to Get the Wrong Guy - Comments

  • MixedEmotions

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    wow! that's mean! he should've
    listened to Emily! if she doesn't
    feel comfortable, then he should
    get her out of there. Or, at least
    she should get herself out of there!
    Update please!
    June 26th, 2010 at 11:37am
  • lil_angel666

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    well that's a bummer that you can't update for the next two week being as i just got on holiday for that amount of time

    eh, anyway nice but I have a bad feeling about that party
    June 25th, 2010 at 11:40am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    And yes! Page 3 is mine!
    Sorry I'm lame. =P
    Love the story though.
    June 24th, 2010 at 06:15pm
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    I'm never comfortable in those type of parties either, so I can relate.
    Two weeks?! How will I survive?
    June 24th, 2010 at 06:14pm
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    Love the icecream fight.
    And haha two cute guys waring over the icecream on her face? Lucky girl.
    More soon?
    June 24th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • MixedEmotions

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    that was pretty mean of christian to tell Em to not put Cam's pics up. seriously Cam needs to try to get Em to like him and not christian. And Cam needs a chance.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 03:15am
  • col-0

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    Only thing I ask for is maybe some more Brett? He was there in the beginning and now it seems as if he completely disappeared. If he's not part of anything then I guess just leave him out but I really liked him in the beginning of the story. Great Update :]
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:33pm
  • K_atie.

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    Oh my gosh:)
    I am totally a team Cam girl=)
    June 22nd, 2010 at 03:29pm
  • lil_angel666

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    Christian gives me really bad vibes
    i do not like him one little bit
    *frowns confused*

    more???
    June 22nd, 2010 at 12:47pm
  • GreatUnknown

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    I could already see Christian minipulating poor Emily about those pictures. In the begining, if someone I liked tripped me, I'd be over them than and there. So hopefully she'll come to her seneses and go for Cam, which will happen.
    Cam on the other hand seems like a sweetie. I love those funny guys.
    Keep writing:)
    June 22nd, 2010 at 08:46am
  • lil_angel666

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    Hi I just started reading and I luv!!!!!

    So far Christian seems like he's totally playing Em like a fiddle and I hate guys like that!!!!!!

    grrrrrrrrr EVIL CHRISTIAN!!!!!!!!!

    anyway more???
    June 21st, 2010 at 11:15am
  • MixedEmotions

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    Christian's just cheap and trying to lure
    Em for some reason! But its obvious that
    Cam likes her a lot!! ^,^ hehe
    but she hasn't opened her eyes yet!
    I don't really like christian, but we
    just have to get through it!

    Omg! I kept laughing at the cheesy jokes!
    they were so funny and sweet!!!!!!!

    Update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;c
    June 21st, 2010 at 07:54am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    *gasp* She invited guys to the girls day!
    Anyway the update was great, I loved the disturbing line from Cam.
    More soon?
    June 20th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • elshiexx

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    this story is soo cute
    update asap
    xx
    June 20th, 2010 at 11:48am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    Love the update.
    Heather has got to be right, no?
    More soon?
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    I love this story so much.
    Cam is so sweet.
    And that's a cute kiss scene between her and christian.
    More soon?!
    June 13th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • the ghost of you;

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    this is story is awesome ;)
    lovelovelove.
    June 7th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • right brain.

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    I am in love with this!
    You must update soon! <3
    June 6th, 2010 at 12:08am
  • stargrl1

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    AWE Cam is a-mazing lol
    He so said that christian was weak just so he would take his arms off of her lol
    Smooooooooooothe rotflol

    Update soon please
    June 5th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • SmexyPeanutButter

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    WOAH!!!! Some one's trying to prove they're the alpha male of the pack

    UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!11
    June 5th, 2010 at 08:20pm