When She Cries - Comments

OMG. Such an amazing story. I cried through over half of it.

"Well, if you weren't such an impatient little shit"
This one line. Is my favorite. Like OMFG. I just love it.
The story is just absolutely amazing
I don't remember how many times I've read it :3

I read this story in about four hours. I was hooked. :) But, I wanted to tell you that the last chapter reminded me of the song Tiny Dancer by Tim McGraw. I never listen to that kind of music but it popped up and I sat there thinking to myself, 'Whoa, freaky. That title was in When She Cries..." But, I love This story and I wanted to tell you. XD

So, I have been looking through my friends stories these last few days and reading yours, but when I came across this one?
This one, had me guessing, crying, laughing, smiling and most any other -ing that could come with a story like this.
Took me two to three hours to read all of it with distractions.
I truely did love this one though.

Um... I just started reading your story and I kinda want to know what Mike looks like... :P

This is amazing. Chapter 26 and 37 made me start crying

I don't wanna believe it's over D:

Just read the whole of your story today; it's amazing. She didn't deserve to die but it was a total shock and that's what makes a great story!
You're a great writer, keep it up. :)

I didn't really enjoy the ending, I thought Zeek should have made another appearance, also Mike should have been in jail since the violence. Just my opinion.

Anyway, apart from that I loved the story. I read it all without stopping.

Another one is dead.
I would fear being a main character in your story.
But I really did like how it ended.
I'm a very morbid person.

i really love this story, it started off amazing and really kept you going but i wish you ended it a little more originally. It was good but it didn't satisfy, do you know what I mean? Well I just wish it didn't have to end this way. Not that it didn't end happy but in your head it's like, and what about mike? He only killed the girl? Whats gunna happen to him?

wow, it ended perfectly, it was a very fitting speech for her,
sad to see it end :(

This ending was the saddest, most beautiful, tear jerking ending I've read. Zacky's speech made me tear up and enforced the true meaning of life: living each day to the fullest. I really enjoyed reading this one. Great job with everything.

*grrr. I forgot what kind of codes message board allowed.
That 'not' should be not.

NO! ELLE WAS <b>NOT</b> ALLOWED TO DIE.
You made me cry too. I NEVER do that on stories anymore.
You, my friend, are a meanieface now. :(
....I loved this story so much!
^Wow, that wasn't totally bipolar.
This was truly one of my favorites<33

Is this story finished? o.O
Sometimes i get a little but confused xD

WTF did just happen?????

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh update pweaaaaaaase

is she gonna die?

How could you do that to us?
It went from being on hiatus to a cliff hanger.
I'm crying right now.
Hysterically in fact .
I hope you feel good about yourself.
...
Okay that was a lie, but still.
UPDATE NOW!
Please.
I'll love you forever.
I love you anyway.
Have a nice day.
I'm hyper.
Bet you couldn't guess.
...
YAY!