When She Cries - Comments

  • mverk22

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    darn i was hoping this wouldn't happen because i think elle is going to be so distane from them all now that she knows val is pregnate and i think elle thinks they will all forget about her and she'll do something stupid and hurt herself or something...love the story can't wait till you post more to this AMAZING story!!!! :D keep the updates comeing!!! :) :D :) :D :) :D
    October 18th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • Heather;

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    I know Michelle is Val's sister and all, but Elle had a right to know before everyone of them. Aside from Matt and Val, obviously.
    Love.
    :)
    October 18th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • mistery gurl

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    heya, so im hooked! i have cried so much
    today while reading your story, its so amazing
    though, that i cant even leave the computer :}
    the story line itself, is so intense and had me hooked straight up,
    please update soon :}
    October 12th, 2010 at 08:18am
  • mverk22

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    i hope elle don't take val being pregnate wrong because of when her mother was pregnate...i loved the updates can't wait till you post aggain!!! :D :)
    October 11th, 2010 at 04:06am
  • mindblind

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    Finally! Matt and Noelle make up.
    Wonder what Jimmy's gunna say.
    Also wonder how everyone's gunna react to Val being prego :)
    Moooore!
    October 10th, 2010 at 04:42pm
  • Heather;

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    If things got worse when her real mom got pregnant... what's she gonna do now?
    :S
    Love it though. :)
    October 10th, 2010 at 03:03pm
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    uhmm updates = happyy courrtney
    (:
    October 5th, 2010 at 04:09am
  • S.C.A.V.A.

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    Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh! TAY!
    I love this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!! :D
    October 4th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • Heather;

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    Ohhhhhhhhhhh, the drama.
    Just as he started talking I was sure she was behind him. Haha.
    Me Love. :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 07:17pm
  • mindblind

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    Poor Elle.
    Always seeming to show up at the wrong moment.
    Hopefully Zacky can fix it? :)
    October 3rd, 2010 at 07:10pm
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    beeest story ever. no joke,
    you should make her run away or something. to make matt feel like a dick, because he's being one.
    pooor elle, *tear*
    October 3rd, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    beeest story ever. no joke,
    you should make her run away or something. to make matt feel like a dick, because he's being one.
    pooor elle, *tear*
    October 3rd, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Well... Get better in every way you can possibly take that as.
    Back to the chapter, poor baby girl.
    She just can't catch a break.
    She already thinks Matt hates her and them he says all that shit.
    Damn.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 04:24am
  • Perfect Exceeder

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    she should lighten up, shes making her dad mad, which makes her feel even worse. yeaah, and brian shouldnt be such a dick.
    September 28th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    They're just trying to help...and we don't even know if Henry is a nut job person identifier or something else. She should really give them a chance. And, yeah, it's a pain in the ass that they're going about helping her (or trying to) in lead lined wellies and jumping from the Empire State Building but none of them know how to deal with teenage girls so they're going to get it wrong somewhere. Ignoring her saying "no" is one of them; she had to get being stubborn from somewhere!!!
    More soon? Please?
    September 28th, 2010 at 12:43pm
  • strawberrybubble

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    i understand that they're trying to help, but that was some pretty fucked up shit
    September 28th, 2010 at 06:48am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    I'd suffer through the pain and walk out
    Stupid fucktards.
    September 28th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • mindblind

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    Low bloooow.
    They're all kind of assholes.
    They need to stop pissing Elle off.
    September 28th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • Heather;

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    These people make me almost as angry as chemistry makes me.
    That's a lot of anger.
    But I love it.
    September 28th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I like the sound of Alley. I think she's going to keep on making the mood light and stop letting Elle mope and get all introverted. Just have to hope no one says something dumb like, "I wish Elle was more fun and light like Alley" to Elle's face. Although, I think Elle will become more fun loving and loud with Alley about. *crosses fingers*
    More Soon? Please?
    September 25th, 2010 at 10:03am