When You're Around - Comments

Nice update! Can't wait for more. :)

Damn for a minute there I thought Jackson had gone violent and WOW poor Kellan why spoil a good moment.

Poor Belle she has to postpone all those sexual urges. One day she has to snap at some point..
I don't like Jame she's such a word. :/
Can't wait for more! Update again soon.

Lmao wow Jamie posesses zero redeeming qualities, huh? What a bitch. Awesome update :)

Jamie is such a whore.
And Lou needs to get laid.
By Kellan, of course! XD

gahh wanna kill jamie!! >_<

awesome chapter, I <3 kellan...poor guys going to have a heart attack if lou kisses him again XD hehe

Ha ha, Lou "paralyzed" Kellan.
This story literally had me laughing my ass off.
My dad was like, "What the hell is wrong with you?"
His facial expression was so funny.
He had a "what-the-fuck-bitch,-are-you-crazy?" look.
I just started laughing harder.
Ah, I'm rambling.
Update!!! :D
This story just made my day. :)

awesome chapter!

aww lou kissed kellan! poor guy must have been shocked! XD hehe

I bloody love this story!

lol 'I think she paralyzed Kellen' poor Kellen it was funny though. I love it.

oh man I havent giggled that much in awhile!
this chapter was sheer GENIUS!
I love how she kissed dimples thinking it was til :)
playboy is much classier, they have more columns than porno :( lol
loved the update! :)

I loved it. It wasn't quite what I was looking for but it was amazing. Though I do have one question. What in the blue blazers have you done to Jackson? He doesn't seem like him self he seems more like Kellen to be truthful but Kellen is spot on. Tops on the story and I eagerly await more.

Wonderful update~ :) Belle and Jackson are back to square one they got this!
Rob is so stupid lol. Update again soon :)
Oh and i agree with Oxymoron this story deserves so much more praise and feedback. Its amazing!!

loved the update!
fucking rob had to open his big mouth! I really hope that Lou and Johnny fix things though :)
and Til oh that man mmm mmm good :)!

i absolutely love this story =)

this story deserves so much more feedback than its getting! I audiably laughed at the sarcasm of the too, its hilarius. Sometimes ill be reading it in public and look like a right prick! But yeah I love it, some of the lines are rally funny, make me want to vote for you as prime minister Haha xo

Ah this one is interesting. Looking forward to the next update =3

i love this soooo much!!!!!!!! can;t wait for the next one!!!

fucking Rob had to be a cockblocker!
oh the sexy time that could've been had with that gorgeous man lol
loved the updates!
thank janis that Belle isn't preggerz

Lou and Til should fuck,
i mean she did say she likes older guys
and he's borderline 50
what if he needs viagra but atleast he's a looker ;)