Can you explain to me how you get a reader hooked by just putting up the first chapter of a story, please? Because this is absolutely amazing so far. I love how you can get a person wanting to read more just by posting a few paragraphs. I can never do that, which proves you are amazingly talented. Can't wait to find out who this is about, and I hope you update it soon!
ROTFL at Layna's old man comment x3 ANYWAYS. I love this. I love how you write in an entirety. Your words just flow so effortlessly<3 I can't wait for more!
i lovez this, i lovez you and i'm glad you're finally revealing your old man crush to society. now you'll know how people will react when you really come out about your relationship ;)